for Her Story4/6/2020 c3 IronTiger26
Is this story dead? If so, it’s such a shame. I found this story and the preceding ones not long ago, and for it to end here is so sad.
Is this story dead? If so, it’s such a shame. I found this story and the preceding ones not long ago, and for it to end here is so sad.
11/3/2017 c3 WatermelonShark
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
12/31/2016 c3 PichuAlt3
I do not remember the characters very well, but this was well written, as I'm sure the previous chapters were. I really can't remember, so I may just reread everything.
I do not remember the characters very well, but this was well written, as I'm sure the previous chapters were. I really can't remember, so I may just reread everything.
12/14/2016 c3 
11ProfessorLugia
That was really good! I got the vibe of 'oppressing dictator in the once peaceful kingdom' really well, and the battle itself was amazingly well-written. Excellent chapter as always, AJ! I look forward to the next update with much anticipation!
-PL
11ProfessorLugiaThat was really good! I got the vibe of 'oppressing dictator in the once peaceful kingdom' really well, and the battle itself was amazingly well-written. Excellent chapter as always, AJ! I look forward to the next update with much anticipation!
-PL
8/14/2016 c2 PichuAlt3
It's nice to see changes like new side plots and competence outside of dungeons.
It's nice to see changes like new side plots and competence outside of dungeons.
8/8/2016 c2 11ProfessorLugia
Oh. This is interesting! Regina is the rightful ruler of the Nectar hollow... I really want to see this fight! And I feel kind of bad for Tempest. His crush just got 'kicked off of the team' in his eyes for no reason. I don't know how he'll react to seeing Martha next time. He'll probably try and fight her. :P I await the next chapter!
-PL
11ProfessorLugiaOh. This is interesting! Regina is the rightful ruler of the Nectar hollow... I really want to see this fight! And I feel kind of bad for Tempest. His crush just got 'kicked off of the team' in his eyes for no reason. I don't know how he'll react to seeing Martha next time. He'll probably try and fight her. :P I await the next chapter!
-PL
8/4/2016 c2 Emblem of Light
Freakin hell, the plot already thickens ont he second chapter...I don't want to get attached to these characters, but too late!
WHo is Yrja and Chad, by the way?
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter as well.
Freakin hell, the plot already thickens ont he second chapter...I don't want to get attached to these characters, but too late!
WHo is Yrja and Chad, by the way?
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter as well.
8/4/2016 c2 8PsychicEevee0103
Now it makes sense why Regina was always so fixated on evolving! She wanted to get her home back and beat the usurper who killed her mother and banished her!
8PsychicEevee0103Now it makes sense why Regina was always so fixated on evolving! She wanted to get her home back and beat the usurper who killed her mother and banished her!
7/28/2016 c1 11ProfessorLugia
Oh my goodness, I loved this chapter! I like the new member being a 'lucky' magby. It'll provide an interesting mechanic to work with. I liked Martha's ingenious idea of bringing teammates, too. I never would've thought of that. I especially liked Terrence's description of his pressure ability activating! Once again, you've made the baseline PMD story but made it interesting and unpredictable! Excellent chapter!
-PL
11ProfessorLugiaOh my goodness, I loved this chapter! I like the new member being a 'lucky' magby. It'll provide an interesting mechanic to work with. I liked Martha's ingenious idea of bringing teammates, too. I never would've thought of that. I especially liked Terrence's description of his pressure ability activating! Once again, you've made the baseline PMD story but made it interesting and unpredictable! Excellent chapter!
-PL
7/28/2016 c1 8PsychicEevee0103
I've been waiting for this for so long, or feels like! I know you get these out ASAP, but when I love things as much as I love your work, even the shortest wait can seen like forever.
8PsychicEevee0103I've been waiting for this for so long, or feels like! I know you get these out ASAP, but when I love things as much as I love your work, even the shortest wait can seen like forever.