
10/10/2016 c5
2RandomNobody37
I do like this story though. But I still want you to update BMCA. It has an interesting concept. This one. But also BMCA.

I do like this story though. But I still want you to update BMCA. It has an interesting concept. This one. But also BMCA.
10/10/2016 c5
2AlbineFox
Good to see you're finally updating the story here, I couldn't find the chapters anywhere else

Good to see you're finally updating the story here, I couldn't find the chapters anywhere else
10/10/2016 c5 Guest
I need to know just how "committed to her sexuality" Judy is here because I can't help but read it through a shipper's eyes and NEED to know whether that is a complete no-go.
Also, I hope Mary has some off-screen redeeming qualities (besides just a magic tongue) because she comes off as quite a beetch. And I'm pretty sure she just threatened to kill a cop while in the presence of another cop...
Yeah... Judy and Nick probably shouldn't be partners anymore.
I need to know just how "committed to her sexuality" Judy is here because I can't help but read it through a shipper's eyes and NEED to know whether that is a complete no-go.
Also, I hope Mary has some off-screen redeeming qualities (besides just a magic tongue) because she comes off as quite a beetch. And I'm pretty sure she just threatened to kill a cop while in the presence of another cop...
Yeah... Judy and Nick probably shouldn't be partners anymore.
10/10/2016 c1
17Libious
This is... painful.
In a good way. You describe the feelings in a way that I could practically feel Nick's pain.
Please, keep on writing.

This is... painful.
In a good way. You describe the feelings in a way that I could practically feel Nick's pain.
Please, keep on writing.
10/10/2016 c4
2MetalFox2013
Man, this fanfic's getting intense. Looking forward to the next chapter x3

Man, this fanfic's getting intense. Looking forward to the next chapter x3
7/31/2016 c2 root.ash
Judy is such an ass in this fic. Don't get offended, of course. I first read it on Tumblr and I'm glad that you post it on fanfiction, all I want now is to read the next chapters :)
Judy is such an ass in this fic. Don't get offended, of course. I first read it on Tumblr and I'm glad that you post it on fanfiction, all I want now is to read the next chapters :)
7/30/2016 c1 jetstar77
Sorry Mary and Judy not Mary and Mary
Sorry Mary and Judy not Mary and Mary
7/30/2016 c2 jetstar77
Good story. But I have a idea on how the story can go. So this this set a full year after the second chapter and nick is some what of Judy's boyfriend but not quit. She is still with Mary. So Mary and Mary go to nick and ask him to get Judy prgenet shins she and Mary can't have kids and for them to become a family and nick stays to help raise the half fox half bunny child. This is Idea that id like you to use.
Good story. But I have a idea on how the story can go. So this this set a full year after the second chapter and nick is some what of Judy's boyfriend but not quit. She is still with Mary. So Mary and Mary go to nick and ask him to get Judy prgenet shins she and Mary can't have kids and for them to become a family and nick stays to help raise the half fox half bunny child. This is Idea that id like you to use.
7/30/2016 c2 Combat Engineer
Here's hoping since that the rest of your stories have happy endings, this one will too.
Here's hoping since that the rest of your stories have happy endings, this one will too.