3/11/2021 c1 Guest
Commit suicide.
Commit suicide.
3/6/2019 c4 omegaderose
useless why rewrite a story and then not even write the smae among of chapters too
useless why rewrite a story and then not even write the smae among of chapters too
6/12/2018 c4 1AntiCreator
Good so far. Shame you left us with a cliffhanger though. I remember reading your first version of this story and I remember it wasn't bad. Not as bad as you seem to think anyway. Hope for more soon. Cheers.
Good so far. Shame you left us with a cliffhanger though. I remember reading your first version of this story and I remember it wasn't bad. Not as bad as you seem to think anyway. Hope for more soon. Cheers.
4/14/2018 c1 Seta88
An interesting beginning, I like Storys with different summons and the ones where he gets the monkey summon are rare. You mixed up the surnames of Homura and Koharu in the beginning.
An interesting beginning, I like Storys with different summons and the ones where he gets the monkey summon are rare. You mixed up the surnames of Homura and Koharu in the beginning.
4/9/2018 c4 6RandomHobo
Naruto should be sasuke.
There's just too much OP shit for sasuke. Two affinities and the Sharingan? Ugh I hate kishimoto for that.
Nice story tho.
Naruto should be sasuke.
There's just too much OP shit for sasuke. Two affinities and the Sharingan? Ugh I hate kishimoto for that.
Nice story tho.
12/14/2017 c2 Guest
The Uchiha and the Third Hokage were able to use Shadow release? Right goodbye. This is extremely bad.
The Uchiha and the Third Hokage were able to use Shadow release? Right goodbye. This is extremely bad.
10/17/2017 c1 3doubledamn
Kinda weird that the Monkey Summoning Clan doesn't specialise in Sage Arts. Their leader is a MASSIVE reference to the 'Great Sage, Equal of Heaven' after all.
Kinda weird that the Monkey Summoning Clan doesn't specialise in Sage Arts. Their leader is a MASSIVE reference to the 'Great Sage, Equal of Heaven' after all.