11/22/2020 c3 7anonauthorr
just gonna leave this comment here and folllow this story in case you update eheheheh
just gonna leave this comment here and folllow this story in case you update eheheheh
5/5/2019 c3 Guest
This is soooooooo good! Can you finish it?!
This is soooooooo good! Can you finish it?!
9/5/2016 c3 Guest
Im really getting into this. Im a huge Nakamura/Karma pairing fan so I hope thats what this turns into even if its slight. Anyway, good job, cant wait for next chapter
Im really getting into this. Im a huge Nakamura/Karma pairing fan so I hope thats what this turns into even if its slight. Anyway, good job, cant wait for next chapter
9/4/2016 c3 LittleMoreThanLost
First of all, great chapter, I really like how you hint at several things and weave several bits of foreshadowing into your writing, such as the "Not yet, that is." It makes me curious as to who and what may be attempting to take her happiness. I also like how you hint at something involving Korosensei with "not because she didn't know the truth" and it is very well put together. I can't wait till the next chapter!
First of all, great chapter, I really like how you hint at several things and weave several bits of foreshadowing into your writing, such as the "Not yet, that is." It makes me curious as to who and what may be attempting to take her happiness. I also like how you hint at something involving Korosensei with "not because she didn't know the truth" and it is very well put together. I can't wait till the next chapter!
9/4/2016 c3 136TheRoseShadow21
Awww, little Rio is very cute. Looking forward to seeing what happens next
Awww, little Rio is very cute. Looking forward to seeing what happens next
8/2/2016 c2 LittleMoreThanLost
I actually really like your style of writing. It is very flowing and descriptive, easily allowing the reader to understand the setting. It is very well done. I hope you update soon, since I am curious as to where this will be going. And I am sure that whatever time you choose to have the story in, it will eventually come back to make sense.
I actually really like your style of writing. It is very flowing and descriptive, easily allowing the reader to understand the setting. It is very well done. I hope you update soon, since I am curious as to where this will be going. And I am sure that whatever time you choose to have the story in, it will eventually come back to make sense.
7/29/2016 c1 10Erika The Witch
Your writing is beautiful and poetic. It's very descriptive and just overall amazing. Keep it up!
Your writing is beautiful and poetic. It's very descriptive and just overall amazing. Keep it up!