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7/30/2016 c1 14Wondo
Poor Peter and Neal. As soon as James entered th picture, their rocky relationship had more downs than ups. Hugs to them both.
Nice one-shot.
7/30/2016 c1 8JoeNeal
Aww perfectly portrayed feelings of Peter. Wish he had good news to share with his consultant :(

Good to hear from u dost :)
7/29/2016 c1 2Pherenike 26
Hey O/

Just now I see that I posted the other comment like a guest... So now I can follow the fic hehehe
7/29/2016 c1 Guest
Hey you! O/ I like verh much of your fic, I just love the way you talk about Peter's feelings and was a really, really great interpretation about all this scenes! Congrats!

If you don't mind, I just suggest to you conect in a better way the sequence that the scenes happen, I think a little bit confuse how his thoughts jump of one subject for another(just a suggestion, please do not be angry or sad)... I will expect very anxious for the next :)

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