9/19/2016 c10 great lemon
that was hot.
that was hot.
9/19/2016 c1 shit
Man, he completely pulverized Agust!
Man, he completely pulverized Agust!
9/19/2016 c10 guest
Amazing Lemon!
Amazing Lemon!
9/18/2016 c10 treeofsakuras
It was such a great chapter, really like to see some natsuxseilah moment, can't wait for the other girls to have their time with natsu.
It was such a great chapter, really like to see some natsuxseilah moment, can't wait for the other girls to have their time with natsu.
9/18/2016 c10 Hellcore
wonderful chapter and lemon!
wonderful chapter and lemon!
9/18/2016 c10 Lemon Lover
Please do one with Erza and Mirajane with some anal scenes!
Please do one with Erza and Mirajane with some anal scenes!
9/18/2016 c10 Naruto
Great job! Update fast.
Great job! Update fast.
9/18/2016 c10 guest
One of the best lemon out there.
One of the best lemon out there.
9/18/2016 c10 2WolfGaming
Really awesome chapter! Awesome lemon, too! I hope Erza will be the next lemon. Cause you know... Erza is best girl! :3 when you do do a lemon for her I have just one request. You of course don't have to do it, you have just irked my perverted side out of me with this chapter. Anyway, my request is when you do Erza's lemon could you add anal with it? It's fine if you don't some people don't like it. I just personally do.
Really awesome chapter! Awesome lemon, too! I hope Erza will be the next lemon. Cause you know... Erza is best girl! :3 when you do do a lemon for her I have just one request. You of course don't have to do it, you have just irked my perverted side out of me with this chapter. Anyway, my request is when you do Erza's lemon could you add anal with it? It's fine if you don't some people don't like it. I just personally do.
9/18/2016 c10 1Omni-Creator Kami of Anime
Nice chapter, and I enjoyed both the Lemon and the backstory between Natsu and Seilah. Though don't you think Natsu's cock size was kinda extreme? I can understand 8-10.5 inches, and maybe 11 inches, but 14 seems like a bit too much, not to mention the thickness and ball size. I would recommend reducing it.
I also hope you do some Anal scenes as well.
Anyway, keep up the good work! Also, I know that Natsu is already incredibly powerful and possesses mastery in Fire Magic, Fire Dragon Slayer Magic, Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic, and probably Curses, but I hope Natsu gains mastery in other forms of magic, like God Slayer Magic. Very few fanfics feature Natsu as a God Slayer, and even fewer(if any) feature Natsu as both a Dragon Slayer and a God Slayer. And considering that Natsu has combined both forms of Magic before to essentially form "Dragon-God Slayer Magic", Natsu could pull it off.
As for how to do it, when Natsu fights and defeats Zancrow, he could forcibly extract Zancrow's Fire God Slayer Magic via Magic Transfer and manifest it as a Magic tattoo, just like with Natsu's Fire Dragon King Mode and Gray's Ice Devil Slayer magic.
And just like with Gray and the Ice Devil Slayer Magic he got from his father Silver, Natsu could permanently transfer and obtain Fire God Slayer Magic, which he can combine with his Dragon Slayer Magic for "Dragon-God Slayer Magic".
Please PM me back on your feedback when you can.
Please update soon!
Nice chapter, and I enjoyed both the Lemon and the backstory between Natsu and Seilah. Though don't you think Natsu's cock size was kinda extreme? I can understand 8-10.5 inches, and maybe 11 inches, but 14 seems like a bit too much, not to mention the thickness and ball size. I would recommend reducing it.
I also hope you do some Anal scenes as well.
Anyway, keep up the good work! Also, I know that Natsu is already incredibly powerful and possesses mastery in Fire Magic, Fire Dragon Slayer Magic, Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic, and probably Curses, but I hope Natsu gains mastery in other forms of magic, like God Slayer Magic. Very few fanfics feature Natsu as a God Slayer, and even fewer(if any) feature Natsu as both a Dragon Slayer and a God Slayer. And considering that Natsu has combined both forms of Magic before to essentially form "Dragon-God Slayer Magic", Natsu could pull it off.
As for how to do it, when Natsu fights and defeats Zancrow, he could forcibly extract Zancrow's Fire God Slayer Magic via Magic Transfer and manifest it as a Magic tattoo, just like with Natsu's Fire Dragon King Mode and Gray's Ice Devil Slayer magic.
And just like with Gray and the Ice Devil Slayer Magic he got from his father Silver, Natsu could permanently transfer and obtain Fire God Slayer Magic, which he can combine with his Dragon Slayer Magic for "Dragon-God Slayer Magic".
Please PM me back on your feedback when you can.
Please update soon!
9/18/2016 c10 18ramasioti100
Wow just awesome man. I love how things are developing.
Although if Natsu literally has that much strength to definitely obliterate Tartaros then why does a kinky Mira scare him that much?
Wow just awesome man. I love how things are developing.
Although if Natsu literally has that much strength to definitely obliterate Tartaros then why does a kinky Mira scare him that much?
9/18/2016 c10 3Mysterious Gamer X
I like this story. Also, I know you said there wouldn't be any more, but I really hope you might reconsider and add Lisanna. After all, why bother saving her if you don't do something with that? Just please think about it.
I like this story. Also, I know you said there wouldn't be any more, but I really hope you might reconsider and add Lisanna. After all, why bother saving her if you don't do something with that? Just please think about it.
9/18/2016 c10 Nexus24
very good chapter.
the trouble is that too hard for the lemon story of adventure and romance.
I hope you can update soon and want to read more and see more fights, and also as Mirajane and Erza react seeing boyfriend with seilah natsu
very good chapter.
the trouble is that too hard for the lemon story of adventure and romance.
I hope you can update soon and want to read more and see more fights, and also as Mirajane and Erza react seeing boyfriend with seilah natsu