
2/25/2017 c23 whitewolf7410
Wow, I'm very impressed with how this turned out. I usually would go on a 2000 word rant but I'm on a tight schedule today so I can't praise you in THE rudest way possible. So I'm just going to say the short version, good job, I love the thought process and how you exhibit the crews personalities and stuff, I'm surprised nothing came out of Kirk's crush but I'm surprisingly happy with it. Don't stress yourself blah blah other words of reassurance.. thanks for being original (collapsed building etc.). Should've put more of a resolution like I said before with other things (hacker, trial stuff, public reaction etc.) once again good job overall, I greatly enjoyed it
Sorry you couldn't witness my insults/personality, hope I don't seem rude bc I'm not acting as rude.
I might Elaborate later if I find time
Till Next Chapter (it's my saying don't bash me)
WhiteWolf
Wow, I'm very impressed with how this turned out. I usually would go on a 2000 word rant but I'm on a tight schedule today so I can't praise you in THE rudest way possible. So I'm just going to say the short version, good job, I love the thought process and how you exhibit the crews personalities and stuff, I'm surprised nothing came out of Kirk's crush but I'm surprisingly happy with it. Don't stress yourself blah blah other words of reassurance.. thanks for being original (collapsed building etc.). Should've put more of a resolution like I said before with other things (hacker, trial stuff, public reaction etc.) once again good job overall, I greatly enjoyed it
Sorry you couldn't witness my insults/personality, hope I don't seem rude bc I'm not acting as rude.
I might Elaborate later if I find time
Till Next Chapter (it's my saying don't bash me)
WhiteWolf
2/24/2017 c23
3Tigger76
Okay like the ending but please please please tell me... and you can call me an idiot for not picking this up earlier... is it Bones or Spock Jim loves. And do they ever get together?
Loved the story thank you for keeping with it

Okay like the ending but please please please tell me... and you can call me an idiot for not picking this up earlier... is it Bones or Spock Jim loves. And do they ever get together?
Loved the story thank you for keeping with it
2/23/2017 c23 Guest
Good story, but you may want to fix the typo in your summary. Bated breathwaiting for something to happen. Baited breathfishy.
Good story, but you may want to fix the typo in your summary. Bated breathwaiting for something to happen. Baited breathfishy.
2/22/2017 c22 Mckirkchronicles
AHHH this is so good, I hope they'll be more soon
AHHH this is so good, I hope they'll be more soon
2/16/2017 c22 Anonymous
This is great! Please write more!
This is great! Please write more!
2/14/2017 c21 Mckirkchronicles
Omg this is amazing! I fear their troubles aren't over yet though, who was broadcasting and what do they want?!
I hope this never ends cause I am LOVING IT!
Omg this is amazing! I fear their troubles aren't over yet though, who was broadcasting and what do they want?!
I hope this never ends cause I am LOVING IT!
12/29/2016 c19 narcissaisme
This is amazing! I am new to the fandom and really enjoyed the background and depth you gave to the characters. Keep it up!
This is amazing! I am new to the fandom and really enjoyed the background and depth you gave to the characters. Keep it up!
12/2/2016 c18
3cr8zgirl
I can't wait to find out what spin the Admirals of Starfleet are going to put on the Marcus/Khan situation, it always seemed to me that Section 31 & Starfleet plus the Federation council had alot to answer in the whole debacle. Plus will we ever findout who hacked into the security feed & why? Will Kirk's mom & McCoy's daughter be making appearances? And of course I can't wait to see Spock & Kirk sorting their pining lovesick selves out. Please update soon.

I can't wait to find out what spin the Admirals of Starfleet are going to put on the Marcus/Khan situation, it always seemed to me that Section 31 & Starfleet plus the Federation council had alot to answer in the whole debacle. Plus will we ever findout who hacked into the security feed & why? Will Kirk's mom & McCoy's daughter be making appearances? And of course I can't wait to see Spock & Kirk sorting their pining lovesick selves out. Please update soon.
11/28/2016 c17 Eva
Yay! An update!
Thank you.
Great chapter, by the way :-D
Yay! An update!
Thank you.
Great chapter, by the way :-D
11/6/2016 c16 knightphoenix2
Nice chapter! Nice to see Spock concentrating on Leonard, now that Jim had woke up.
But, what's next? Will we find out what caused that explosion that almost killed them? And, how will this change the upcoming Starfleet hearings?
More, please!
Nice chapter! Nice to see Spock concentrating on Leonard, now that Jim had woke up.
But, what's next? Will we find out what caused that explosion that almost killed them? And, how will this change the upcoming Starfleet hearings?
More, please!