for Four Half-Blood9/2/2016 c3 
4KagomeGirl021
I have a feeling that English is not your first language. There are a lot of grammar problems with this fic but I am enjoying this fic despite that. Maybe look into getting someone who speaks and writes fluent English to help you beta your fic. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more chapters.
4KagomeGirl021I have a feeling that English is not your first language. There are a lot of grammar problems with this fic but I am enjoying this fic despite that. Maybe look into getting someone who speaks and writes fluent English to help you beta your fic. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more chapters.
8/20/2016 c2 blood angel jay
your story has great potential however it is really hard to read and understand I don't want to sound mean but have you thought about getting a bata to prof read it it may help
your story has great potential however it is really hard to read and understand I don't want to sound mean but have you thought about getting a bata to prof read it it may help
8/14/2016 c3 gabycha
Hello! my beloved author. I loved the chapter. I love this Harry is so cute. Those kisses Draco gave Harry if they are tale. That promiscuous. Good and teachers know that Harry is Draco. Harry is to be feared, but so cute protecting their friends. Tonto Ron, I was going to give it a try. A Dragon, I want to see how they hide. Unicorn know my idea is that it salves and not kill him. As a thank helps you find your way to the land of fire. Although it could not be more exciting. Or already my dear basilisk is a relative of Harry and know the country of the elements. Greetings and see you.
Hello! my beloved author. I loved the chapter. I love this Harry is so cute. Those kisses Draco gave Harry if they are tale. That promiscuous. Good and teachers know that Harry is Draco. Harry is to be feared, but so cute protecting their friends. Tonto Ron, I was going to give it a try. A Dragon, I want to see how they hide. Unicorn know my idea is that it salves and not kill him. As a thank helps you find your way to the land of fire. Although it could not be more exciting. Or already my dear basilisk is a relative of Harry and know the country of the elements. Greetings and see you.
8/11/2016 c3 Guest
I think Neville should go with Draco and harry when they go to the elemental nations please update soon
I think Neville should go with Draco and harry when they go to the elemental nations please update soon
8/7/2016 c2 gabycha
I loved the chapter. Draco's attitude is similar to that of Sasuke jajajaa. Neville will be a great ally and friend. I have a slight idea how to find the unicorn but waited for your story. one question: You will kill the basilisk or going to link it to Harry as a family? Sorry ... I forgot to vote. My vote would go to Theo and Blaise. I like those two Slytherin. and you could put the couple. TheoNeville I love this couple. Another question when are you going to bring the two worlds and in that time Naruto? For me you could update every day. But I will be considered you could update at least three times or twice a week. I love your story. There are not many stories like this. He waited until your next update.. See you the next chapter. psd: I'm speaking Spanish and I do not speak much Spanish
I loved the chapter. Draco's attitude is similar to that of Sasuke jajajaa. Neville will be a great ally and friend. I have a slight idea how to find the unicorn but waited for your story. one question: You will kill the basilisk or going to link it to Harry as a family? Sorry ... I forgot to vote. My vote would go to Theo and Blaise. I like those two Slytherin. and you could put the couple. TheoNeville I love this couple. Another question when are you going to bring the two worlds and in that time Naruto? For me you could update every day. But I will be considered you could update at least three times or twice a week. I love your story. There are not many stories like this. He waited until your next update.. See you the next chapter. psd: I'm speaking Spanish and I do not speak much Spanish
8/2/2016 c1 Jack
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT