for DXD Sharingan Dragon Slayer1/8/2017 c17 Guest Q
Hn, its infinity.
Hn, its infinity.
1/8/2017 c17 Michael McDaniel
I say on a scale of 1 - 10, 100
I say on a scale of 1 - 10, 100
1/8/2017 c17 Michael289
25
25
1/8/2017 c17 raio10
Awesome work as usual and loki is a 100 on the fucked scale... Itachi is always anyones worst nightmare and my favorite character from Naruto keep up the good work.
Awesome work as usual and loki is a 100 on the fucked scale... Itachi is always anyones worst nightmare and my favorite character from Naruto keep up the good work.
1/8/2017 c17 
2duked
A good chapter.
I would give Loki a 12.
About Sona I think Itachi is more the type of person she would fall for and in the canon she knows about Saji's feelings for her, but also about the feelings of two girls in her peerage for him.
Itachi could train to regain his strategic thinking and caution by starting to play chess with Sona and defeating her.
Please update soon.
2dukedA good chapter.
I would give Loki a 12.
About Sona I think Itachi is more the type of person she would fall for and in the canon she knows about Saji's feelings for her, but also about the feelings of two girls in her peerage for him.
Itachi could train to regain his strategic thinking and caution by starting to play chess with Sona and defeating her.
Please update soon.
1/8/2017 c17 3PersonaQeminod1
Nice work on the chapter. My rate is a zero. For the amount of remain left of him in the aftermath.
3PersonaQeminod1Nice work on the chapter. My rate is a zero. For the amount of remain left of him in the aftermath.
1/5/2017 c1 AnAddictedReader
Eh, I got a bit interested from your summary but I knew the likelihood of me stopping midway through chapter one and giving up on the story was high. I understand that not everyone can write well (me included) but it says a lot about a story when there is spelling mistakes within the first few sentences. Not sure if English isn't your first language or whatnot but I imagine that is a huge turnoff for people who might peek into your story. I really do recommend proofreading a few times before submitting. With that said, good luck with your story!
Eh, I got a bit interested from your summary but I knew the likelihood of me stopping midway through chapter one and giving up on the story was high. I understand that not everyone can write well (me included) but it says a lot about a story when there is spelling mistakes within the first few sentences. Not sure if English isn't your first language or whatnot but I imagine that is a huge turnoff for people who might peek into your story. I really do recommend proofreading a few times before submitting. With that said, good luck with your story!
12/30/2016 c16 Ricky
Can you get make your over less op?
I think you also make itachi to weak he would easily destroy anyone from the dxd world.
Can you get make your over less op?
I think you also make itachi to weak he would easily destroy anyone from the dxd world.
12/30/2016 c15 2duked
The story is good, but I think Itachi is too careless.
Could you add Sona to his harem please?
2dukedThe story is good, but I think Itachi is too careless.
Could you add Sona to his harem please?
12/29/2016 c16 Harambe
Loved it :3
Btw are you planing to continue the story after you run out of dxd lore? I think that would be pretty cool...once I get a taste of a good sotory I hate having to see it end, besides it definitely gets extra points cus you pared up two of my fav anime characters of all time, I think they make a great pear totally ying/yang!
Loved it :3
Btw are you planing to continue the story after you run out of dxd lore? I think that would be pretty cool...once I get a taste of a good sotory I hate having to see it end, besides it definitely gets extra points cus you pared up two of my fav anime characters of all time, I think they make a great pear totally ying/yang!
12/29/2016 c16 3PersonaQeminod1
I vote for having the next power up being from Koneko and see how her sister react to this.
3PersonaQeminod1I vote for having the next power up being from Koneko and see how her sister react to this.