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11/8/2016 c7 Guest
Swanqueen!
11/7/2016 c7 Guest
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
Captain Swan!
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Captain Swan!
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Nice story :)
11/7/2016 c7 19paupaupi
I would like it to be Captain Swan, but feel free to chose wherever you like.
This was a great chapter! I liked to see how everyone cares for Emma, David, Mary Margaret, and her friends; they care for her even if the still don't know her well and I think she deseves to have people like them in her life.
11/7/2016 c7 1Ravenflame13
#captainswanforlife
11/7/2016 c7 Guest
Another good chapter, she needs to tell on whale, and please let her see Emily again
10/3/2016 c6 19paupaupi
This is great! I like that she's kinda starting to make friends, and that they care for her.
10/2/2016 c5 Araya
Update soon! I think MM or David should talk with Emma after class or something so then They can start putting pieces together on what's going on with Emma's home life
10/2/2016 c6 Guest
Please tell me Emma will get to see Emily again
8/18/2016 c5 paupaupi
I love this story! I'm so curious to see what's gonna happen next and how Emma will related to everyone, hope you can update soon.
8/4/2016 c4 Guest
Please update soon
8/4/2016 c4 evelyn.gromano
I noticed that you used 1 and 3 person as points of view, it can be a little confusing. Please chose one and go with it.
8/3/2016 c4 Guest
GRAHAM IS A TEACHER JAHAHA A LIVING TEACHER I CRY HOW COULD YOU BUT ALSO THANK YOU BUT SORY ALSO EMMAS FRIEND GROYP IS ADORABLE AND IM KINDA FEELING THE KILLIAN X EMMA VIBE IN THIS ONE SURPRISINGLY THO SWANQUEEN WOHLD BE ADORABLE ASF TOOOO AHHH UPDATE PLS HAHA ALSO MAKE RUBY HAVE A GF LOWKEY JK ITS YOU FIC HAHAH LIVE YOUR LIFE LOL LOVE YOU
Ps it's Kaitlyn (too lazy to sign in)
8/3/2016 c1 6kanyon01
for the record all those threes at the end of my other review wer meant to be a heart
8/3/2016 c3 kanyon01
Aw Emma is so angsty and it hurts that nightmare was so sad. This def has angst, I like the part where your like even when Emma is sad, her goto answer is "I'm fine."
Lol and I hate Braidon and I feel bad for Emily, when she got yelled at Iwas like ughhh noo
Also you write Emma pretty well, it feels like its actually her like when she said "kid" to Emily in the first chapter, that feels like something she would say canonly
"She wants to go home so she can just curl up in a ball after eating her yummy food." idk why but that sounds like something you would say hahaha
"way to fucking go you stupid shithead" omg I'm done I cant even rn...same tho
dmannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn whats gonna happennnnn? I cant wait to read le update.
THe only criticism I would give is with thatone biggg paragraph in chapter one to maybe seperate it into a few smaller paragraphs lol but yuisss good storyyyyy 33333333333
8/3/2016 c3 Guest
I'm curious to see where this goes. I hope Emma gets to see Emily again or they end up in the same home again.
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