for Fighting Fate2/25/2022 c2 Guest
Amazing story.
Amazing story.
4/15/2021 c7 thanzintay.2000
OK. This is really amazing. A thought but, is the man who commissioned the music box Ellen herself? Before becoming younger again for whatever reason? There's something similar going on in cannon afterall.
OK. This is really amazing. A thought but, is the man who commissioned the music box Ellen herself? Before becoming younger again for whatever reason? There's something similar going on in cannon afterall.
6/19/2020 c7 Dav009
This is my first D-Greyman fanfiction and I really like what you did was it. I do hope you update more in the future.
This is my first D-Greyman fanfiction and I really like what you did was it. I do hope you update more in the future.
5/26/2020 c4 chibi313
MANA'S EYES TURNED GOLD, MANA'S EYES TURNED GOLD! also this chapter made me think of what mana looks like without his clown getup, unless the ladies legit just flirted with him in the clown costume which i mean i guess? also mana calling ellen, allen, like oof. I feel like something is going to happen to nathan because of his business as a phantomhive and then itll maybe lead into his death where ellen turns hIM into an akuma instead of mana?! unless im reading too much into it..
MANA'S EYES TURNED GOLD, MANA'S EYES TURNED GOLD! also this chapter made me think of what mana looks like without his clown getup, unless the ladies legit just flirted with him in the clown costume which i mean i guess? also mana calling ellen, allen, like oof. I feel like something is going to happen to nathan because of his business as a phantomhive and then itll maybe lead into his death where ellen turns hIM into an akuma instead of mana?! unless im reading too much into it..
5/26/2020 c3 chibi313
damn, and here i was comparing them all to various noah family members but tHEY'RE ALL FROM THE PHANTOMHIVE FAMILY which black butler reference but how exactly that will play out i am super curious about
damn, and here i was comparing them all to various noah family members but tHEY'RE ALL FROM THE PHANTOMHIVE FAMILY which black butler reference but how exactly that will play out i am super curious about
5/26/2020 c2 chibi313
Allen the doggy dying was so sad, i just remember the scene in the anime and ughhh so heartbreaking. im kinda wondering if fate is a part of the story in that ellen will constantly be meeting the same people allen met...I do wonder tho if mana senses something different about ellen, in the story it feels like he's almost attuned to how she feels
Allen the doggy dying was so sad, i just remember the scene in the anime and ughhh so heartbreaking. im kinda wondering if fate is a part of the story in that ellen will constantly be meeting the same people allen met...I do wonder tho if mana senses something different about ellen, in the story it feels like he's almost attuned to how she feels
5/26/2020 c1 chibi313
I laughed a little too much at the Naruto reincarnation bit lol, but I especially love the easy acceptance of the the protagonist's reincarnation, I'm just a little too tired of reading stories where the mc laments her death for a bit too much and this story seems like a promising refresher. When Nathan was introduced I immediately thought of Tyki but it might be too early to tell. I feel like no matter how much Ellen tries to avoid following the actual storyline, people will find her
I laughed a little too much at the Naruto reincarnation bit lol, but I especially love the easy acceptance of the the protagonist's reincarnation, I'm just a little too tired of reading stories where the mc laments her death for a bit too much and this story seems like a promising refresher. When Nathan was introduced I immediately thought of Tyki but it might be too early to tell. I feel like no matter how much Ellen tries to avoid following the actual storyline, people will find her
4/16/2020 c7 
1JadeDragon100
Neat story, too bad it’s been so many years since it last updated, I’ll still follow just in case since there haven’t been many Si Oc D Gray Man fanfics, especially ones where the oc is Allen and the development in the story is actually paced and detailed. I really liked the black butler references scattered in, and the music box bit definitely opens up a large aspect of her reincarnation and what it means and how it happened, so if this continues I’d love to find out more about that. Ellen’s relationship with Nathan and Mana are adorable and I really hope to see this continue someday; all in all, I really liked your story with the way you wrote it and what you’ve done with it.
1JadeDragon100Neat story, too bad it’s been so many years since it last updated, I’ll still follow just in case since there haven’t been many Si Oc D Gray Man fanfics, especially ones where the oc is Allen and the development in the story is actually paced and detailed. I really liked the black butler references scattered in, and the music box bit definitely opens up a large aspect of her reincarnation and what it means and how it happened, so if this continues I’d love to find out more about that. Ellen’s relationship with Nathan and Mana are adorable and I really hope to see this continue someday; all in all, I really liked your story with the way you wrote it and what you’ve done with it.
9/8/2019 c7 7Mithya Aviana Cailin
i really am in love with this fic. i hope someday u will find ur passion for this fic and continue this.
7Mithya Aviana Cailini really am in love with this fic. i hope someday u will find ur passion for this fic and continue this.
11/17/2018 c7 7Mithya Aviana Cailin
Oh my this fic is awesome. I love ellen nathan and mana. The bit about phantomhive is awesome too. I love this fic so so much. Pls pls dont abandon this fic. I need u to update this fic. Write more soon please.
7Mithya Aviana CailinOh my this fic is awesome. I love ellen nathan and mana. The bit about phantomhive is awesome too. I love this fic so so much. Pls pls dont abandon this fic. I need u to update this fic. Write more soon please.