for Betrayal10/1/2016 c1 Guest
very good, loved
very good, loved
8/15/2016 c1 
1CrimsonMystic
Love it, please update. There are literally no PJ/Campione fanfics on this site, so im looking forward to more of this one
1CrimsonMysticLove it, please update. There are literally no PJ/Campione fanfics on this site, so im looking forward to more of this one
8/6/2016 c1 Guest
good chapter please update more often
good chapter please update more often
8/5/2016 c1 1MagellanGuillaume-3
Welcome back Elveril! The premise of this story is wonderful, and you executed it perfectly. I love it! Again, welcome back to the site!
1MagellanGuillaume-3Welcome back Elveril! The premise of this story is wonderful, and you executed it perfectly. I love it! Again, welcome back to the site!
8/5/2016 c1 XXX Chaos Breaker XXX
I just thought of this type of crossover yesterday an after reading this chapter i think you could have done a lot better at mixing the two universes together truthfully you didn't have to mix them at all, you could have just kept universes separated and just have percy end up dimension traveling sometime after he left Olympus into the campione universe but you did mix the two universes it ended up looking very random and unplanned i hope you improve the story
I just thought of this type of crossover yesterday an after reading this chapter i think you could have done a lot better at mixing the two universes together truthfully you didn't have to mix them at all, you could have just kept universes separated and just have percy end up dimension traveling sometime after he left Olympus into the campione universe but you did mix the two universes it ended up looking very random and unplanned i hope you improve the story
8/5/2016 c1 2draculbestia
authorities as example
1 [dead heroes] heroe
Heroes, each and every one, come all fall compared to the Champion of heaven!
A single authority for Michael. With it, as he has the power to hurt a God very steel.
2 {light} heroe Carrier
"Oh Lord, I am the bearer of light of hope and faith, let the evil and seductive are destroyed by your right hand"
Gain control over the light.
Samael
3} {Poison Angel King
"May my blood into poison, let my wings spread, covering the world of darkness that my life becomes death of my enemy, bearing the symbol of death Angel who rebel against the sky! "
Slightly change your body. Growing wing up to six pairs of flying, his blood become terrible poison able to make any living being rot before death (the victim can be saved if he / she cut the part that touches the blood) however, the effect of weaken if used against God; each time you use this authority aura become very malice, his eyes become purple able to read other emotion. When you reach the peak of its power turn their black sclera and large halo of pale purple appear on the back that radiates the aura of purple that vibrate the space around it. Because of the deadly poison, the poison can also affect your if used too long.
{4} The flames of purgatory king
"My divine wrath incinerate the sinner and bring your fate in the underworld"
This authority stems from its connection with Satan the devil of anger king allows you wrapped in flames purple and use them to burn sinners.
5 {Ring of Death} as the angel of death and its connection to death king rider
The Master of death itself. With this ring as proof, I declare. I'm the one who governs the cycle of life and death. I'm the one who will decide whether the death is just.
(And so I say, people will not die if they are killed.)
An authority representing the right to govern the passage of souls, as well as control over the earth souls. When active, it appears as a ring on her finger with a black stone.
It is an authority on the cycle of life and death, and allows stop, accelerate or completely reverse. With this active Authority, which can send to the souls who can not pass their future life, you can stop death itself, or can reverse death completely, provided it was recent and the connection between body and soul it remains.
Among the dead or mortally wounded in his presence they are 'marked' and you can choose to stay for Shirou to decide their final destination, or move on to the afterlife. Of those who remain, they have an additional option of deciding to become "servant" Shirou, to pledge their luck to him as an eternal vassal, to become the sword that would go against the gods themselves and grant him absolute authority on his soul.
2draculbestiaauthorities as example
1 [dead heroes] heroe
Heroes, each and every one, come all fall compared to the Champion of heaven!
A single authority for Michael. With it, as he has the power to hurt a God very steel.
2 {light} heroe Carrier
"Oh Lord, I am the bearer of light of hope and faith, let the evil and seductive are destroyed by your right hand"
Gain control over the light.
Samael
3} {Poison Angel King
"May my blood into poison, let my wings spread, covering the world of darkness that my life becomes death of my enemy, bearing the symbol of death Angel who rebel against the sky! "
Slightly change your body. Growing wing up to six pairs of flying, his blood become terrible poison able to make any living being rot before death (the victim can be saved if he / she cut the part that touches the blood) however, the effect of weaken if used against God; each time you use this authority aura become very malice, his eyes become purple able to read other emotion. When you reach the peak of its power turn their black sclera and large halo of pale purple appear on the back that radiates the aura of purple that vibrate the space around it. Because of the deadly poison, the poison can also affect your if used too long.
{4} The flames of purgatory king
"My divine wrath incinerate the sinner and bring your fate in the underworld"
This authority stems from its connection with Satan the devil of anger king allows you wrapped in flames purple and use them to burn sinners.
5 {Ring of Death} as the angel of death and its connection to death king rider
The Master of death itself. With this ring as proof, I declare. I'm the one who governs the cycle of life and death. I'm the one who will decide whether the death is just.
(And so I say, people will not die if they are killed.)
An authority representing the right to govern the passage of souls, as well as control over the earth souls. When active, it appears as a ring on her finger with a black stone.
It is an authority on the cycle of life and death, and allows stop, accelerate or completely reverse. With this active Authority, which can send to the souls who can not pass their future life, you can stop death itself, or can reverse death completely, provided it was recent and the connection between body and soul it remains.
Among the dead or mortally wounded in his presence they are 'marked' and you can choose to stay for Shirou to decide their final destination, or move on to the afterlife. Of those who remain, they have an additional option of deciding to become "servant" Shirou, to pledge their luck to him as an eternal vassal, to become the sword that would go against the gods themselves and grant him absolute authority on his soul.