for RISE OF THE HOUSE OF BLACK9/26/2024 c2 Guest
Nullifirer makes me think of niffler . Niffler auto corrected to Hitler Oh...
Nullifirer makes me think of niffler . Niffler auto corrected to Hitler Oh...
7/25/2024 c11 BlackLove31
thank you for coming back. i actually sat reread this story and fell in love all over again. so thank you
thank you for coming back. i actually sat reread this story and fell in love all over again. so thank you
6/22/2024 c6 PhoenixHarbinger
isnt Perseus suppose to be 4 years older than charlie, hes supposed to bein nymphodora's year group.
isnt Perseus suppose to be 4 years older than charlie, hes supposed to bein nymphodora's year group.
1973/11/2024 c11 Qhr
Si vas a poner una nueva versión es mejor que las publiques por separado
Si vas a poner una nueva versión es mejor que las publiques por separado
3/8/2024 c11 Guest
Love this story can't wait for more
Love this story can't wait for more
3/7/2024 c2 FrazerMedia
story is great so far, but your spelling has a lot to be desired. I'll try to continue, but the mistakes become incredibly distracting. It feels almost rushed.
story is great so far, but your spelling has a lot to be desired. I'll try to continue, but the mistakes become incredibly distracting. It feels almost rushed.
3/6/2024 c11 Hyuga Tobirama
First of welcome back! This story does not need to be rewritten it needs to be continued from where you left it off
First of welcome back! This story does not need to be rewritten it needs to be continued from where you left it off
2/29/2024 c10 Guest
where are you...this is the absolute best fanfiction that i loved and you just disappeared...i dont know how many fanfictions i have consumed but this gives me different kick...it has everything ...please don't abandon it ...
where are you...this is the absolute best fanfiction that i loved and you just disappeared...i dont know how many fanfictions i have consumed but this gives me different kick...it has everything ...please don't abandon it ...
12/11/2023 c1 chorch
This story deserves a rewrite and continuation. It has very interesting elements but your inexperience writing and constructing the plot is evident, but I think there is an interesting background
This story deserves a rewrite and continuation. It has very interesting elements but your inexperience writing and constructing the plot is evident, but I think there is an interesting background
10/17/2023 c1 Wolf
You killed the story the moment you switched to pov.
You killed the story the moment you switched to pov.