for Animagus at War3/21 c33 RK
i dont know i sort of lost the plot or something. i just cant get into the story anymore.
my headcanon is that voldemort takes over the world forms the dark council that is made up of dark lords and ladys. they rule over both magical and mugles via imperius, control politics, tecnology and also trim down the mugle population if they feel its too much.
as for harry and dumbles etc they live the life harry always wanted: peaceful and ordinary. ecept when they go out of their way to set fire to things and terrorize the population in an effort to fight against voldemort instead of just enjoying their peace.
the end
i dont know i sort of lost the plot or something. i just cant get into the story anymore.
my headcanon is that voldemort takes over the world forms the dark council that is made up of dark lords and ladys. they rule over both magical and mugles via imperius, control politics, tecnology and also trim down the mugle population if they feel its too much.
as for harry and dumbles etc they live the life harry always wanted: peaceful and ordinary. ecept when they go out of their way to set fire to things and terrorize the population in an effort to fight against voldemort instead of just enjoying their peace.
the end
3/20 c31 RK
xD u have a fetish for profecys. however i will skip this one aswell. so far the story was perfectly normal without knowing any of your profecys. (yes the chars talk about it but in the end it afects nothing. its just worrying over "what ifs")
xD u have a fetish for profecys. however i will skip this one aswell. so far the story was perfectly normal without knowing any of your profecys. (yes the chars talk about it but in the end it afects nothing. its just worrying over "what ifs")
3/20 c28 RK
seperating the magical and the muggle world. as it should be. if elektricity and magic would get along id call it stupid but since it doesnt this is the natural order.
seperating the magical and the muggle world. as it should be. if elektricity and magic would get along id call it stupid but since it doesnt this is the natural order.
3/20 c24 RK
i have to be honest: the new regime sounds genuinly superior to not just the canon voldemort but the canon good guys AND your good guys aswell
at this point im starting to root for voldemort. if you intended for that then hats of to you for managing that
i have to be honest: the new regime sounds genuinly superior to not just the canon voldemort but the canon good guys AND your good guys aswell
at this point im starting to root for voldemort. if you intended for that then hats of to you for managing that
3/20 c24 RK
cant believe they went after the queen but putting the minister under the imperius was something they opted against. rookwood legit talked with him. they rly need a mugleborn on their side that explains /outright manages the muggle side of things for them
cant believe they went after the queen but putting the minister under the imperius was something they opted against. rookwood legit talked with him. they rly need a mugleborn on their side that explains /outright manages the muggle side of things for them
3/20 c23 RK
first time i disagree with la pantera, the taboo on the name was briliant and got many of voldemorts enemys caught, among them harry potter himself
not everything voldemort did in canon was stupid (admitably having 6 (intended) horcruxes was among the peak stupidity. voldemort failed to understand the most powerfull property of the horcrux: friends. friends who revive you THE SECOND your dead. but no voldemort had to not tell anybody of the plan and so when he vanished bella and barty went to torture the longbotoms for information instead of going "our lord is dead OH NO anyways lets just revive him" and then 5 minuts later voldemort climbs out of a cauldron in a safehouse that he already preped with all the ingridients, such a rows of vials of blood of his enemys. personaly id take it a step further and have barty and bella have a horcrux of their own so whoever of us 3 dies the other 2 can revive and thus 3 horcruxes are infinitly more pwerfull then 7) (its sort of a no brainer if you bother to think about it for more then 10 seconds)
first time i disagree with la pantera, the taboo on the name was briliant and got many of voldemorts enemys caught, among them harry potter himself
not everything voldemort did in canon was stupid (admitably having 6 (intended) horcruxes was among the peak stupidity. voldemort failed to understand the most powerfull property of the horcrux: friends. friends who revive you THE SECOND your dead. but no voldemort had to not tell anybody of the plan and so when he vanished bella and barty went to torture the longbotoms for information instead of going "our lord is dead OH NO anyways lets just revive him" and then 5 minuts later voldemort climbs out of a cauldron in a safehouse that he already preped with all the ingridients, such a rows of vials of blood of his enemys. personaly id take it a step further and have barty and bella have a horcrux of their own so whoever of us 3 dies the other 2 can revive and thus 3 horcruxes are infinitly more pwerfull then 7) (its sort of a no brainer if you bother to think about it for more then 10 seconds)
3/19 c23 RK
i think voldemort wouldnt get rid of the other 3 houses. he used their items for horcruxes. he thinks they have intrinsic value, even griffindor.
only at the very end when he was outraged over the defense mounted by the hogwartians he decided to delete the other 3 houses. it was the moment when they insulted him despite his aparent viktory over harry potter and didnt bend over the way he wanted that he made the decision.
your voldemort is difrent altho funnily enough i think your voldy is LESS likely to abolish the other 3 houses due to his more sane aproach. spiting 3/4 of the population like that is just pointlessly stupid and as i already said he reveered all 4 founders
i think voldemort wouldnt get rid of the other 3 houses. he used their items for horcruxes. he thinks they have intrinsic value, even griffindor.
only at the very end when he was outraged over the defense mounted by the hogwartians he decided to delete the other 3 houses. it was the moment when they insulted him despite his aparent viktory over harry potter and didnt bend over the way he wanted that he made the decision.
your voldemort is difrent altho funnily enough i think your voldy is LESS likely to abolish the other 3 houses due to his more sane aproach. spiting 3/4 of the population like that is just pointlessly stupid and as i already said he reveered all 4 founders
3/19 c23 RK
i have said this before but again: the queen is sort of 100% irelevant. she is irelevant in our world, so it stands to reason she doesnt sudenly become relevant because magic exists.
if i were voldemort i wouldnt atack the queen, for the simple reason that i wouldnt even notice her existance. if i were to learn of her i wouldnt care. but if i were to learn that she thinks some "risk reward" "dont poke sleeping dragon" thing prevents me from doing so i would wipe out the entire family just to show her how dumb of a thought that was.
i think having the queen be part of your story adds nothing besides drawing atention away from the good quality of the story. it should be completly deleted out of the story
i have said this before but again: the queen is sort of 100% irelevant. she is irelevant in our world, so it stands to reason she doesnt sudenly become relevant because magic exists.
if i were voldemort i wouldnt atack the queen, for the simple reason that i wouldnt even notice her existance. if i were to learn of her i wouldnt care. but if i were to learn that she thinks some "risk reward" "dont poke sleeping dragon" thing prevents me from doing so i would wipe out the entire family just to show her how dumb of a thought that was.
i think having the queen be part of your story adds nothing besides drawing atention away from the good quality of the story. it should be completly deleted out of the story
3/19 c20 RK
im actualy curious how big the profecy is, i wont read it and ill see if the story still makes sense (besides everybody talking about OH NO THE PROFECY of course)
im actualy curious how big the profecy is, i wont read it and ill see if the story still makes sense (besides everybody talking about OH NO THE PROFECY of course)
3/19 c18 RK
5 abducted children. ngl that made me laugh. i thought greyback wolfsbane would mean he raids a muggle disco or something and bites anywhere from 50 to 200 people over the course of the night (with proper preplanning and a wizard who helps him with aparition)
5 abducted children. ngl that made me laugh. i thought greyback wolfsbane would mean he raids a muggle disco or something and bites anywhere from 50 to 200 people over the course of the night (with proper preplanning and a wizard who helps him with aparition)
3/19 c15 RK
"if voldemort couldnt rob it"
tecnicaly true but actualy false: voldemort broke in and got out without getting caught, it just so happend that the vault was emptied minuts earlier by hagrid
secondly: voldemort managed this while nothing more then an advisor to quirel (quirel states that after the stone failure his master decided to keep a much closer eye on him aka quiremort)
gringots security is rly not that big. especialy if u consider that sirius owns the vault next to the lestrange vault in other words: he can get right outside the lestrange vault 100% legaly.
"if voldemort couldnt rob it"
tecnicaly true but actualy false: voldemort broke in and got out without getting caught, it just so happend that the vault was emptied minuts earlier by hagrid
secondly: voldemort managed this while nothing more then an advisor to quirel (quirel states that after the stone failure his master decided to keep a much closer eye on him aka quiremort)
gringots security is rly not that big. especialy if u consider that sirius owns the vault next to the lestrange vault in other words: he can get right outside the lestrange vault 100% legaly.
3/18 c1 RK
i have to be honest: i still dont see any reason the queen is involved. shes a spectator and completly useless in every way im aproaching this. the scenes with her add nothing but words to the story in a way that takes atention away from the well written parts.
i mean clearly your a fan of introducing mugle things into magical society and if im honest i dont rly have an opinion on it, altho it strikes me as odd that the magicals cant just cast a diagnostic spell that scans the brain like an MRT. i feel if they can just heal bones in 0.5 seconds then it stands to reason that they could do that aswell. similarly to how its never mentioned if there are anti levitation or anti summoning charms on the egg the dragon guards but you didnt just have your characters summon the fans in your task. it just seems reasonable in both cases imo.
if magical people who wield mind altering spells and potions cant restore nevs parents then i think its sort of unrealistic that our medicine can. i mean medicine is powerfull and amazing but wizards can litteraly enter somebody elses mind and have a look around and assess damage in ways we cant even imagine
again, i dont rly mind and it would be hard to reason why nevs parents should recover but i do feel you dumbed wizards down to make muggles great in some cases. just deny them diagnostic spells they by all reason should have
i have to be honest: i still dont see any reason the queen is involved. shes a spectator and completly useless in every way im aproaching this. the scenes with her add nothing but words to the story in a way that takes atention away from the well written parts.
i mean clearly your a fan of introducing mugle things into magical society and if im honest i dont rly have an opinion on it, altho it strikes me as odd that the magicals cant just cast a diagnostic spell that scans the brain like an MRT. i feel if they can just heal bones in 0.5 seconds then it stands to reason that they could do that aswell. similarly to how its never mentioned if there are anti levitation or anti summoning charms on the egg the dragon guards but you didnt just have your characters summon the fans in your task. it just seems reasonable in both cases imo.
if magical people who wield mind altering spells and potions cant restore nevs parents then i think its sort of unrealistic that our medicine can. i mean medicine is powerfull and amazing but wizards can litteraly enter somebody elses mind and have a look around and assess damage in ways we cant even imagine
again, i dont rly mind and it would be hard to reason why nevs parents should recover but i do feel you dumbed wizards down to make muggles great in some cases. just deny them diagnostic spells they by all reason should have
3/15 c35 Guest
Hello author! I just wanted to let you know that I love your works, have read Accidental Animus multiple times, have suggested it to friends, and have read Animagus at War twice now. I love the way you write it, what you did to change the way the story went, how you took the characters and made them more three dimensional, and the aspects and details you go into in your world. Even having already read it before, I'm on the edge of my seat when I reread it, and I reread it just often enough that I can't recall the exact details but know the general outline. I think that the way that you are progressing the story is brilliant, and I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue it. I'm sure I will be pleasantly surprised when I get to read another chapter, no matter what it contains. I love the humor and little details about the characters that you've given them, like Harry sometimes hissing and growling, and being calmed by a scratch behind the ears. I love how you made Hermione more than just a bookworm or a nerd. You made Harry more than some dumb griffindor who, both stupidly and courageously, would jump into any situation for a friend. You made him cunning and sly, like a cat, and your versions of the characters are all the more likes le for it. I'm glad you didn't gloss over the worries of Emma and Dan when they were adopting Harry, and their skepticism of Dumbledore. Your writing is wonderful, and I have never been taken out of the story by a typo, wondering, "what did the author mean when they wrote that?" and it keeps flowing smoothly. Luna is more than some weird girl who can't tell what is real, and the relationships that Harry and Hermione form are so intricate and complicated, giving the story more complexity and interest. The sibling bond that they have is wonderful as well, and it's really healthy. They both support each other, but they can also tease each other. Harry's dealings in the wizengamot are also interesting, as you get us see the political background of wizarding Britain, and bringing in international wizarding relations is also super interesting to read. I always love reading the Animagus duo, and I hope that you can find the time to come back to it. I know that you've had people upset with you for not following their comments for how they want the story to go, but if they want the story to go a certain way, they should just write an alternate ending themselves. Your writing is beautiful, and I love every word. I hope this comment finds you in good health and good spirits. Stay safe, and I hope to get an update whenever you're ready. Thank you for putting your work into the world. I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story. Thank you.
Hello author! I just wanted to let you know that I love your works, have read Accidental Animus multiple times, have suggested it to friends, and have read Animagus at War twice now. I love the way you write it, what you did to change the way the story went, how you took the characters and made them more three dimensional, and the aspects and details you go into in your world. Even having already read it before, I'm on the edge of my seat when I reread it, and I reread it just often enough that I can't recall the exact details but know the general outline. I think that the way that you are progressing the story is brilliant, and I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue it. I'm sure I will be pleasantly surprised when I get to read another chapter, no matter what it contains. I love the humor and little details about the characters that you've given them, like Harry sometimes hissing and growling, and being calmed by a scratch behind the ears. I love how you made Hermione more than just a bookworm or a nerd. You made Harry more than some dumb griffindor who, both stupidly and courageously, would jump into any situation for a friend. You made him cunning and sly, like a cat, and your versions of the characters are all the more likes le for it. I'm glad you didn't gloss over the worries of Emma and Dan when they were adopting Harry, and their skepticism of Dumbledore. Your writing is wonderful, and I have never been taken out of the story by a typo, wondering, "what did the author mean when they wrote that?" and it keeps flowing smoothly. Luna is more than some weird girl who can't tell what is real, and the relationships that Harry and Hermione form are so intricate and complicated, giving the story more complexity and interest. The sibling bond that they have is wonderful as well, and it's really healthy. They both support each other, but they can also tease each other. Harry's dealings in the wizengamot are also interesting, as you get us see the political background of wizarding Britain, and bringing in international wizarding relations is also super interesting to read. I always love reading the Animagus duo, and I hope that you can find the time to come back to it. I know that you've had people upset with you for not following their comments for how they want the story to go, but if they want the story to go a certain way, they should just write an alternate ending themselves. Your writing is beautiful, and I love every word. I hope this comment finds you in good health and good spirits. Stay safe, and I hope to get an update whenever you're ready. Thank you for putting your work into the world. I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story. Thank you.
3/10 c35 GiantPeach333
Love the story. Looking forward to the next update. Hopefully it is soon.
Love the story. Looking forward to the next update. Hopefully it is soon.
2/25 c23 Guest
As a lunar cycle is 28 days, it would actually be 33 days, not 35.
As a lunar cycle is 28 days, it would actually be 33 days, not 35.