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10/19/2017 c1 retired-now-anonymized
Why is the entire think in bold?
8/10/2016 c1 jacktheripper932
interesting I look forward to seeing where this goes
8/8/2016 c1 Um I can't read
First, this is all in bold...
Second, your formatting isn't right.

Learn a bit more about grammar will you? I don't mean this as hate. But seriously, every piece of speech should be a new paragraph.

So, I will read this once these formatting issues are fixed, and give another review. Please fix these critical errors.

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