for Portrait of LoVe11/30/2016 c3 vecabd
Oh such a beautiful chapter. Domestic Logan taking care of two toddlers. Dick being there for Logan, and being childish Dick. Lorrie reading about muses and worried about her Dad.
I had to go to AO3 to see Logan's pictures. He was mesmerized ... such a beautiful encounter. And we only read the beginning of it. Can't wait for more. :)
Oh such a beautiful chapter. Domestic Logan taking care of two toddlers. Dick being there for Logan, and being childish Dick. Lorrie reading about muses and worried about her Dad.
I had to go to AO3 to see Logan's pictures. He was mesmerized ... such a beautiful encounter. And we only read the beginning of it. Can't wait for more. :)
11/28/2016 c3 Guest
Great update!
Great update!
11/28/2016 c3 
9kerali
Love how your adapting this story. I do wish that we got more of Veronica and Piz since he called right as she was mad at Wallace.
9keraliLove how your adapting this story. I do wish that we got more of Veronica and Piz since he called right as she was mad at Wallace.
11/28/2016 c3 cheshire15
I love that there is another update. I like it moving forward. What i dont get is veronica settling again for someone who doesnt see her at all, but rather makes her into this image of who they think she should be instead of who she is. Duncan with his patronizing head pat kind of indulgence. My girl detective, isnt she cute? Attitude. Piz thinking she is a girly girl who would love a clingy dude, a trendy restaurant with strangers amd a blindsiding proposal to pressure into the answer he wants. She wants stability and consistency, but why does she settle for boring, condescending boys with no spark or passion, who do not value her for herself but rather the illusion she can give of being who they want nd who have no interest in dispelling the bubble so they can truly see her for who she is. Please please do not settle for piz. He is a doucheburger masquerading as a hipster airhead. Please?! Even if LoVe doesnt immediately get back together, have her end it with piznarski, it is painful to read and or warch. She. May love him, but is not in love with him, it is merely covenient emotionally.
I love that there is another update. I like it moving forward. What i dont get is veronica settling again for someone who doesnt see her at all, but rather makes her into this image of who they think she should be instead of who she is. Duncan with his patronizing head pat kind of indulgence. My girl detective, isnt she cute? Attitude. Piz thinking she is a girly girl who would love a clingy dude, a trendy restaurant with strangers amd a blindsiding proposal to pressure into the answer he wants. She wants stability and consistency, but why does she settle for boring, condescending boys with no spark or passion, who do not value her for herself but rather the illusion she can give of being who they want nd who have no interest in dispelling the bubble so they can truly see her for who she is. Please please do not settle for piz. He is a doucheburger masquerading as a hipster airhead. Please?! Even if LoVe doesnt immediately get back together, have her end it with piznarski, it is painful to read and or warch. She. May love him, but is not in love with him, it is merely covenient emotionally.
11/21/2016 c2 vecabd
More more more ! Such a beautiful mixture between the Veronica Mars movie and Portrait of Love movie LOL LOL !
Your version of Piz is so annoying. He believes he's in a movie. He just wants to do what he wants, not caring for V's feelings at all. And yes girl, he doesn't know you at all. That's V's fault too by the way, for being with him.
On the Logan side, of course he's the best Dad ever. I would love to see him going through all that with Veronica by his side. Can't wait for more.
More more more ! Such a beautiful mixture between the Veronica Mars movie and Portrait of Love movie LOL LOL !
Your version of Piz is so annoying. He believes he's in a movie. He just wants to do what he wants, not caring for V's feelings at all. And yes girl, he doesn't know you at all. That's V's fault too by the way, for being with him.
On the Logan side, of course he's the best Dad ever. I would love to see him going through all that with Veronica by his side. Can't wait for more.
11/12/2016 c2 layoung13
so glad to read update; I had to go back to read chapter 1, but I enjoyed it. Piz's character is always so clueless. I can almost always get involved in VM stories even after all these years. Your stories drop me into another world. Your dialogue is well-written.
Great line you gave to Keith: "who cares about those twits." so true...
so glad to read update; I had to go back to read chapter 1, but I enjoyed it. Piz's character is always so clueless. I can almost always get involved in VM stories even after all these years. Your stories drop me into another world. Your dialogue is well-written.
Great line you gave to Keith: "who cares about those twits." so true...
11/12/2016 c2 3frenchbobcat
This fic is a great idea. I like to discover how you adjust the series and the film. His name in french is "the muse of the artist" and when you write that Logan hasn't found his muse yet, I think f it. I will wait impatiently for the next chapter. I wonder if you will use the books too.
3frenchbobcatThis fic is a great idea. I like to discover how you adjust the series and the film. His name in french is "the muse of the artist" and when you write that Logan hasn't found his muse yet, I think f it. I will wait impatiently for the next chapter. I wonder if you will use the books too.
11/11/2016 c2 14Kayte76
I thought this was going to be another lost story. I'm glad there is another installment. I was hoping for a reunion but I guess I'm forced to wait...
14Kayte76I thought this was going to be another lost story. I'm glad there is another installment. I was hoping for a reunion but I guess I'm forced to wait...
8/19/2016 c1 Conan
I saw that movie! It was an okay movie, I mean it's Hallmark what do you expect. I can't wait to read the Veronica Mars version. Ugh, Piz is the worst. Not liking the idea that Logan fell in love with Carrie, but I guess it's canon from the Veronica Mars movie.
I saw that movie! It was an okay movie, I mean it's Hallmark what do you expect. I can't wait to read the Veronica Mars version. Ugh, Piz is the worst. Not liking the idea that Logan fell in love with Carrie, but I guess it's canon from the Veronica Mars movie.
8/14/2016 c1 Guest
Love it. I have to agree w Veronica. This is something you talk about before just doing.
Love it. I have to agree w Veronica. This is something you talk about before just doing.