for Portrait of LoVe8/10/2016 c1 Guest
Ugh. Piz.
Ugh. Piz.
8/9/2016 c1 JoeCool701
I am not sure about this story so far. But Veronica has to say no to Piss I mean really no just no. I am not sure how I feel of Logan having a child with Carrie I never liked her at all. I am LoVe all the way! With that being said I am curious on where you go with this story. Please update quick!
I am not sure about this story so far. But Veronica has to say no to Piss I mean really no just no. I am not sure how I feel of Logan having a child with Carrie I never liked her at all. I am LoVe all the way! With that being said I am curious on where you go with this story. Please update quick!
8/9/2016 c1 layoung13
Good beginning. I always enjoy your writing style. I like the way you use parts from the movie and the recent post-movie books. Good job weaving the different story lines.
Good beginning. I always enjoy your writing style. I like the way you use parts from the movie and the recent post-movie books. Good job weaving the different story lines.
8/8/2016 c1 cheshire15
needs to think about it. Seriously
She is not happy and he only loves who he thinks she is. I generally get very irritated with Veronica in delusional land . Duncan 2.0 does not happiness. If equals boredom with mars.
Btw,good premise. I saw that movie. Loved it. Myfav part was the drama when she went off on him for giving up and replacing her then running out, followed by his return to the art exhibit and declaring he wanted to go with her.
needs to think about it. Seriously
She is not happy and he only loves who he thinks she is. I generally get very irritated with Veronica in delusional land . Duncan 2.0 does not happiness. If equals boredom with mars.
Btw,good premise. I saw that movie. Loved it. Myfav part was the drama when she went off on him for giving up and replacing her then running out, followed by his return to the art exhibit and declaring he wanted to go with her.
8/8/2016 c1 Angelpete87
I like this story I am interested to see where you take this story line. Piz is an idiot I really hated his character on the show and the movie. Anyway I love seeing Logan as a father
I like this story I am interested to see where you take this story line. Piz is an idiot I really hated his character on the show and the movie. Anyway I love seeing Logan as a father
8/8/2016 c1 
14Kayte76
clearly it's a no, everything that was wrong made it obvious. If you know someone well enough to marry then you would know how they would want to be proposed to. ugh Piz makes me sick. Lovely that Carrie's parents are just as annoying as she. Okay you can move on to her returning home to neptune now.
14Kayte76clearly it's a no, everything that was wrong made it obvious. If you know someone well enough to marry then you would know how they would want to be proposed to. ugh Piz makes me sick. Lovely that Carrie's parents are just as annoying as she. Okay you can move on to her returning home to neptune now.
8/8/2016 c1 21irma66
Very cute start. Ugh Piz. Clueless in any environment.
I saw your source TV movie and it was cute but I was there for JDoh, not Jessica from OLTL, so there wasn't enough about him and his life for my taste. I'm pretty sure you'll have Logan be as important a character as Veronica in this version so I'm sure I'll end up much happier than I was watching the Hallmark movie.
21irma66Very cute start. Ugh Piz. Clueless in any environment.
I saw your source TV movie and it was cute but I was there for JDoh, not Jessica from OLTL, so there wasn't enough about him and his life for my taste. I'm pretty sure you'll have Logan be as important a character as Veronica in this version so I'm sure I'll end up much happier than I was watching the Hallmark movie.