
8/27/2021 c35 Numbnuts55
disney hercul- i mean HUNKULES was a great movie despite how much was inaccurate
disney hercul- i mean HUNKULES was a great movie despite how much was inaccurate
8/27/2021 c35 Undeath9087
Pretty sure Tantalus was a son of Zeus (big surprise there). Other than that, great chapter.
Pretty sure Tantalus was a son of Zeus (big surprise there). Other than that, great chapter.
8/26/2021 c35 Guest
So glad to see another update! :) This is one of my favorite fics and this chapter did not disappoint. Can’t wait to read more!
So glad to see another update! :) This is one of my favorite fics and this chapter did not disappoint. Can’t wait to read more!
8/26/2021 c35 chriskidd2001
That was awesome Poor Hermes,George,and Martha but glad that Hermes put Zeus in his place People glaring at Zeus because he let Tantulas into camp near their children love the way people tell myths by mixing them together to tell a story like how Annabeth did about the Fleece or how Hermes gifts to Percy what he wanted Percy to do for him and how Hestia likes Hermes talk about family but Dionysus defending the children or Percy about Tyson safety amazing chapter as always can't wait for the next one glad to have you back with a new chapter
That was awesome Poor Hermes,George,and Martha but glad that Hermes put Zeus in his place People glaring at Zeus because he let Tantulas into camp near their children love the way people tell myths by mixing them together to tell a story like how Annabeth did about the Fleece or how Hermes gifts to Percy what he wanted Percy to do for him and how Hestia likes Hermes talk about family but Dionysus defending the children or Percy about Tyson safety amazing chapter as always can't wait for the next one glad to have you back with a new chapter
8/15/2021 c17 Victoria Schult
I like this chapter except for one detail. The Chimera isn't poisonous, it is venomous. This is not a mistake on your part but rather on Uncle Rick and whoever edited the book. People just don't realize that there is a difference between being poisonous and being venomous. Snakes are venomous, plants and certain frogs are poisonous.
Other than that I really enjoyed the chapter and all of the fun reactions to the events of the story. I am definitely going to continue reading after this.
Also, your grammar and spelling are perfect. I can find no problems at this time.
I like this chapter except for one detail. The Chimera isn't poisonous, it is venomous. This is not a mistake on your part but rather on Uncle Rick and whoever edited the book. People just don't realize that there is a difference between being poisonous and being venomous. Snakes are venomous, plants and certain frogs are poisonous.
Other than that I really enjoyed the chapter and all of the fun reactions to the events of the story. I am definitely going to continue reading after this.
Also, your grammar and spelling are perfect. I can find no problems at this time.
8/5/2021 c27 Elemental Ninja 1608
loved the chapter. the way everyone found the truth and even how Percy stopped the attack
loved the chapter. the way everyone found the truth and even how Percy stopped the attack
8/5/2021 c26 Elemental Ninja 1608
Excellent chapter. I loved how everyone wanted Sally to free herself
Excellent chapter. I loved how everyone wanted Sally to free herself
8/5/2021 c23 Elemental Ninja 1608
Really good chapter. Loved how Hades will try to get Anabeth permission to go to the Underworld to play with Cerberus
Really good chapter. Loved how Hades will try to get Anabeth permission to go to the Underworld to play with Cerberus