for The Fates Want Change8/11/2016 c1 Guest
pretty good introduction. the length was alright.
pretty good introduction. the length was alright.
8/13/2016 c2 Argotora
YES! SALLY NEEDS A PUNCHING BAG AND SO DO THE GODS! YES TAKE GABE IN! (But flash him out near the end we don't want him to know about his 'disappearance' *wink wink*)
And Yes! Young Percy needs to be in here too!
And Bring in Blackjack and make him able to speak so everyone can understand him (REMEMBER THE DOUGHNUTS!)
And why not take in old heroes too? Just so we can rub it in the face of Heracles (or Hercules, whatever floats your boat!)
I look forward to more!
YES! SALLY NEEDS A PUNCHING BAG AND SO DO THE GODS! YES TAKE GABE IN! (But flash him out near the end we don't want him to know about his 'disappearance' *wink wink*)
And Yes! Young Percy needs to be in here too!
And Bring in Blackjack and make him able to speak so everyone can understand him (REMEMBER THE DOUGHNUTS!)
And why not take in old heroes too? Just so we can rub it in the face of Heracles (or Hercules, whatever floats your boat!)
I look forward to more!
8/13/2016 c2 Live4Fandom
You should bring in younger Percy. You should also bring in Zoe, Beckendorf, Silena, and Luke from the underworld.
You should bring in younger Percy. You should also bring in Zoe, Beckendorf, Silena, and Luke from the underworld.
8/11/2016 c1 Guest
Also could you space out everybody's conversation and not put it in long paragraph form.. But Overall Great Story!
Also could you space out everybody's conversation and not put it in long paragraph form.. But Overall Great Story!
8/11/2016 c1 BRyan
Also could you space out everybody's conversation and not put it in long paragraph form..
Also could you space out everybody's conversation and not put it in long paragraph form..
8/12/2016 c2 Lunalab
Put Gabe in so Sally has a punching bag. Plus I want to hear his reaction to meeting percy's godly family especially his dad and the rest of the olympians
Put Gabe in so Sally has a punching bag. Plus I want to hear his reaction to meeting percy's godly family especially his dad and the rest of the olympians
8/12/2016 c2 Angelic Phoenix
I love how you started before Neptune. It's something I haven't seen yet. The first chapter was great and I can't wait till the next one. Bringing in Tyson and Mrs. O'Leary would be cool. Upate soon!
I love how you started before Neptune. It's something I haven't seen yet. The first chapter was great and I can't wait till the next one. Bringing in Tyson and Mrs. O'Leary would be cool. Upate soon!
8/12/2016 c2 
5Mikaza1498
BRING GABE ! It will be hilarious! Bring Tyson! not younge Percy though it will make thing even more confusing.
5Mikaza1498BRING GABE ! It will be hilarious! Bring Tyson! not younge Percy though it will make thing even more confusing.
8/12/2016 c2 3Gogeta12345
lol about the cat younger Percy yes Tyson maybe definitely Gabe as a punching bag
3Gogeta12345lol about the cat younger Percy yes Tyson maybe definitely Gabe as a punching bag
8/12/2016 c1 kittykatz101
I'd just like to say that you forgot that Percy is an ex-carrier of the Achilles Curse
I'd just like to say that you forgot that Percy is an ex-carrier of the Achilles Curse
8/11/2016 c1 Ichisake
I like it when Jason is super jealous of Percy. More fluff/cute moments with Percy and Annabeth, like Annabeth sitting on Percy's lap during the reading because they haven't seen each other in months, and past Annabeth blushes when she sees her older self with a very hot dude. And Athena and Poseidon getting mad at Percy and Annabeth, they would explode if they saw their rival's child kissing their child! Aphrodite and Piper would love that.
I like it when Jason is super jealous of Percy. More fluff/cute moments with Percy and Annabeth, like Annabeth sitting on Percy's lap during the reading because they haven't seen each other in months, and past Annabeth blushes when she sees her older self with a very hot dude. And Athena and Poseidon getting mad at Percy and Annabeth, they would explode if they saw their rival's child kissing their child! Aphrodite and Piper would love that.