for Team Eleven2/10/2022 c4 Samswordsman123
Hmm. Well I actually thought of making a self insert of myself on Yakumos team.
Hmm. Well I actually thought of making a self insert of myself on Yakumos team.
2/10/2022 c3 Samswordsman123
Okay, Rin and Naruto? That is just wrong. Hs like half her age.
Okay, Rin and Naruto? That is just wrong. Hs like half her age.
2/9/2021 c4 Guest
Did anyone start finishing it
Did anyone start finishing it
7/12/2020 c4 
5Z-Arc34
I would like to adopt this fanfiction because I have a few ideas on how to progress the story.
5Z-Arc34I would like to adopt this fanfiction because I have a few ideas on how to progress the story.
7/12/2020 c4 Z-Arc34
I will take your team eleven story I've got some idea's on how to progress the story.
I will take your team eleven story I've got some idea's on how to progress the story.
3/7/2018 c2 shephawk
You could have team 7 get wave and have rins team arrive as backup and this is just me have haku survive thanks to rin saving him from kakashis raikiri and have him join her team for chunin exams
You could have team 7 get wave and have rins team arrive as backup and this is just me have haku survive thanks to rin saving him from kakashis raikiri and have him join her team for chunin exams
2/12/2017 c6 7StuphinUrMuphin
Why are you rewriting it?! This is fucking great! I love this story man!
7StuphinUrMuphinWhy are you rewriting it?! This is fucking great! I love this story man!
2/12/2017 c1 ExplodingKnuckler
Nice Start, I'm Definitely Looking Forward To Reading More. I Hope The Pairing Is Naruto x Rin x Yakumo Since Both Are Pretty Rare :)
Nice Start, I'm Definitely Looking Forward To Reading More. I Hope The Pairing Is Naruto x Rin x Yakumo Since Both Are Pretty Rare :)
10/23/2016 c5 10Kami of Anime
So good with what you have...but why you stop? It's good and you left it on a rather sad note with out writing anything else...make Rin not sad...I command it!
10Kami of AnimeSo good with what you have...but why you stop? It's good and you left it on a rather sad note with out writing anything else...make Rin not sad...I command it!