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9/4/2016 c5 2blood enraged
while a good fic,i think you kinda went at the romance part a bit to much like a neanderthal, its a bit too direct. if i have any advice for you, its to practice a bit more subtlety when concerning romancer in any future fics or stories you write. Dont just bash us over the head with 'i love him', draw it out a bit, i mean for goddess sakes they are preteens, they might not even be going through puberty yet
8/24/2016 c5 Brehze
Great chapters
8/16/2016 c6 Guest
Oh man I wish she stayed a little bit longer hope everything works out with the three of them
8/18/2016 c5 WindyCitySlayer1
Yes Rin and naruto
Can't wait
Please continue
8/16/2016 c5 Rebmul
this chapter was cutesy and fluffy
8/16/2016 c4 Rebmul
So i have to ask who is incharge of the akatsuki cuase it cant be obito and if it is that makes no since what so ever
8/16/2016 c2 Rebmul
huh I wonder if kakashi released the kyubi you could have obito be alive and create the akatsuki to help Naruto that would be interesting and Naruto would gain a cousin out of pain
8/16/2016 c1 Rebmul
so since rin is alive where is obito the only reason he went nuts and stayed with madera's plan was cause she died so is he really dead id have to assume so cause if he lived he would have come back to the village he was obsessed. Since she has the sanbi I'm guessing kiri isn't in a civil war cause akatsuki would have no reason to destabilize it as they don't need a excuse to get into kiri to get the sanbi. So who ripped out the kyubi or did it escape on its own. and my next question is, is this a yakumo Naruto pairing or is it a yakumo/Naruto/rin I'm kinda hoping for the harem pairing. and I can see hinata going yandere at the chunin exams and making a enemy out of Naruto and I can see kurenai training her to beat yakumo I just hope yakumo kicks her ass if that happens.
8/16/2016 c6 Nexus24
fuuuuuuck .l.
8/16/2016 c6 Adjuster
Didn't you update this a few days ago how does that constitute as being dead
8/15/2016 c5 16Wyrtha
Congrats on surviving your first day. I have to say though ... 2 is nice but 3 is a better number. Oh well I'm sure if a 3rd worthy girl shows up either in the village ... perhaps Ayame or outside that'd be fun for them to figure out.
8/15/2016 c5 NarutoKushina
Nice chapter, I hope the back up is Gai's team or Asuma's team. The third Hokage should know that sending Kakashi or Kurenai would be a big mistake.

Poor Rin, but soon she will be happy at least.

Don't worry about classes and homework slow down updates, school is really important.
8/15/2016 c5 bankai777
Will Yakumo fight Hinata in the Chunin Exams.
8/15/2016 c5 28Kairan1979
I think their relationship progresses too soon.
8/15/2016 c5 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Awww. How sweet! This was a cute chapter. Keep up the good work! Cause I look forward to more!
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