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8/11/2020 c2 corpuzevan4
More chapters please
5/31/2017 c2 10ItsEizanAgain
*referred to chapter 2
5/31/2017 c1 ItsEizanAgain
Good job bro, you have put a 'ring' to this story *BA DUM TSS
5/4/2017 c2 36robert32514
Let's see how this goes.
5/4/2017 c2 5Revamped Persona
It's good to see this story finally updated. Keep up the good work!
8/15/2016 c1 14Rubius
nice chapter, cant wait for the next one
8/13/2016 c1 Epyon Legium
This was a pleasant start to a new story. Though I saw that you have 2 of the exact same stories on your profile which kind of confuses me, so you may want to fix that. Other than that I'll patiently await your next update.
8/13/2016 c1 Guest
Don't make issei a devil those are too over used
8/12/2016 c1 3CrazyCriticer46
Okay, my advice is... don't make Issei a devil, I think with that kind of power, he won't be easily killed by a low-class Fallen Angel. You'd need to reread and edit the story to see if there's any mistake (which it is). I think you'd need to change Issei's personality/appearance, (1) make him go into a snarky and humorous fellow. (2) change his appearance back into his canon part. (3) this is going to be a complain, why did the devils can't get a scratch against those Ghouls/Phantom? Koneko could pretty well handed those Ghouls pretty much by herself, the others included, that's seem to be not fair isn't it? Seeing them get crushed like a normal human? And secondly, the pacing is really bad, you'd need to add a scene of the ORC recapped everything back, though, good job on the suspense, it may not seem much, but I guess it's a start.
8/12/2016 c1 CrazyCriticer46
Okay, my advice is... don't make Issei a devil, I think with that kind of power, he won't be easily killed by a low-class Fallen Angel. You'd need to reread and edit the story to see if there's any mistake (which it is). I think you'd need to change Issei's personality/appearance, (1) make him go into a snarky and humorous fellow. (2) change his appearance back into his canon part. (3) this is going to be a complain, why did the devils can't get a scratch against those Ghouls/Phantom? Koneko could pretty well handed those Ghouls pretty much by herself, the others included, that's seem to be not fair isn't it? Seeing them get crushed like a normal human? And secondly, the pacing is really bad, you'd need to add a scene of the ORC recapped everything back, though, good job on the suspense, it may not seem much, but I guess it's a start.
8/12/2016 c1 2dsgundam00
not a bad story idea... hope to see more from you in the future...
8/12/2016 c1 robinsonc387
When's the next chapter going to be put up? Also for the opening try acceleration by fear and loathing in Las Vegas.
8/12/2016 c1 GPX-2013
This is impressive.

Here's my choice, Issei cannot become a Devil, but he can still assist the Occult Research Club somehow.

Here's my other choice, no Issei meeting Raynare/Yuma Amano at all, or no Issei killed by Raynare. If you pick Issei meets Yuma/Raynare, then Issei can sense something wrong about Yuma so he decided to investigate. Issei, as Wizard, manage to put up a fight against Raynare, until she waste too much energy fighting Issei. Rias and her friends somehow arrive in the battle. Raynare seeing this decided to fly away.

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