for Eye of the Beholder6/11/2019 c3 
4adelphe24
Im loving this! Lucy being smarter and thorough and determined to join the thunder god tribe. And she stood up to Laxus!
Im kinda already shipping your laxus/lucy.
So lucy is fifteen and thus this takes place before the series starts, right?
4adelphe24Im loving this! Lucy being smarter and thorough and determined to join the thunder god tribe. And she stood up to Laxus!
Im kinda already shipping your laxus/lucy.
So lucy is fifteen and thus this takes place before the series starts, right?
3/10/2018 c3 takeagamble27
This story line is incredible. I love Lucy as a working mage. It's so unique!
This story line is incredible. I love Lucy as a working mage. It's so unique!
11/5/2017 c3 16Gothic Rain
Yeah, this chapter got me laughing. Though joining the team could seem rather sudden it seems quite a lot like life and hence fitting. Their reactions were even more priceless. Good work as always.
16Gothic RainYeah, this chapter got me laughing. Though joining the team could seem rather sudden it seems quite a lot like life and hence fitting. Their reactions were even more priceless. Good work as always.
11/5/2017 c2 Gothic Rain
The Celestial Spirit's characterizations are making me think on how to write them in my own story. It's very insightful. Good work :)
The Celestial Spirit's characterizations are making me think on how to write them in my own story. It's very insightful. Good work :)
11/5/2017 c1 Gothic Rain
I'm impressed by this. Usually, the first chapter isn't hooking for many fan fiction stories and only gets interesting half-way in but not this one. I am hooked and following the line ;)
I'm impressed by this. Usually, the first chapter isn't hooking for many fan fiction stories and only gets interesting half-way in but not this one. I am hooked and following the line ;)
11/1/2017 c3 Guest
THIS. THIS LUCY.
This story is great and I love it and I really wish we had more au-Lucy’s with this ‘what if’ business twist. And the changed spirit relationships just feel so natural and appealing! I like Lucy a lot as a character in terms of potential but not of execution canonically, and I feel like this story manages the rare trait of portraying that potential without completely warping her character. I really enjoyed what was written and hope you continue to write more! Thanks! :)
- Aliathe (unlogged on mobile)
THIS. THIS LUCY.
This story is great and I love it and I really wish we had more au-Lucy’s with this ‘what if’ business twist. And the changed spirit relationships just feel so natural and appealing! I like Lucy a lot as a character in terms of potential but not of execution canonically, and I feel like this story manages the rare trait of portraying that potential without completely warping her character. I really enjoyed what was written and hope you continue to write more! Thanks! :)
- Aliathe (unlogged on mobile)
9/7/2017 c3 othergirls
Oh man, Lucy~ This story is going places I haven't seen before and I love it! Thanks for the delightful chapter.
Oh man, Lucy~ This story is going places I haven't seen before and I love it! Thanks for the delightful chapter.
5/24/2017 c3 Natzed202
This is such an amazing story! I really like the idea, can't wait for the chapter!
This is such an amazing story! I really like the idea, can't wait for the chapter!
4/7/2017 c3 Naarano
I love Lucy so much it hurts. She's so determined and willful in this I love it. Everyone is so surprised at her choice to join the thunder tribe, and so am I. I really like it, it's something new and I think that it could be developed really well. Lucy has a much more responsible personality, seeming more mature than she should be at fourteen so I think it does well that she is sitting at the cool kids table. I especially like her relationship with Aquarius in this. It's so warm and lovely. Thank you updating, I had to reread the entire story again because I like it so much!
I love Lucy so much it hurts. She's so determined and willful in this I love it. Everyone is so surprised at her choice to join the thunder tribe, and so am I. I really like it, it's something new and I think that it could be developed really well. Lucy has a much more responsible personality, seeming more mature than she should be at fourteen so I think it does well that she is sitting at the cool kids table. I especially like her relationship with Aquarius in this. It's so warm and lovely. Thank you updating, I had to reread the entire story again because I like it so much!
4/5/2017 c3 Guest
I love this story!
I love this story!
4/5/2017 c3 9Defiant Nefelibata
I. Adore. This. Fic!
I am so in love with how you've expanded on Lucy's relationship with her spirits and cannot wait to see what you do with Cancer and Taurus.
9Defiant NefelibataI. Adore. This. Fic!
I am so in love with how you've expanded on Lucy's relationship with her spirits and cannot wait to see what you do with Cancer and Taurus.
4/4/2017 c3 10Gaia Kame
I think I've fallen in love with this story! Amazing writing thus far and plot development based off the idea of one little thing within the canon story. Please keep up the good work and I hope to see an update soon! Until next time, ja-ne!
10Gaia KameI think I've fallen in love with this story! Amazing writing thus far and plot development based off the idea of one little thing within the canon story. Please keep up the good work and I hope to see an update soon! Until next time, ja-ne!
4/4/2017 c3 Cream and Sugar
An update! I was really excited to read the new chapter! I love how you're going in such a fresh direction, with Lucy pretty much immediately dismissing everyone else at Fairy Tale in order to join the first group she encountered (rather like how she stuck to Natsu as the first guild member she meets)! Can't wait to see how she'll get along as the newest member of the Thunder God Tribe. I hope she can rescue poor Virgo soon!
An update! I was really excited to read the new chapter! I love how you're going in such a fresh direction, with Lucy pretty much immediately dismissing everyone else at Fairy Tale in order to join the first group she encountered (rather like how she stuck to Natsu as the first guild member she meets)! Can't wait to see how she'll get along as the newest member of the Thunder God Tribe. I hope she can rescue poor Virgo soon!
4/4/2017 c2 Guest
So is Lucy 15?
So is Lucy 15?