
8/22/2016 c1 Fanned
Color me interested!
I'd love to see what other characters thought about all that was happening during that period. Especially after some time passed, and they had the time to sit down and do that.
This is a well-written piece, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.
One thing I noticed - isn't a verb for action of breathing called 'breathe'?
Color me interested!
I'd love to see what other characters thought about all that was happening during that period. Especially after some time passed, and they had the time to sit down and do that.
This is a well-written piece, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.
One thing I noticed - isn't a verb for action of breathing called 'breathe'?
8/17/2016 c1 Guest
This is a well handled reflection on how disturbing the SPM adventure had been for the Mario brothers. Short, but very good!
This is a well handled reflection on how disturbing the SPM adventure had been for the Mario brothers. Short, but very good!
8/16/2016 c1
1Purpletshirt
This is a truly amazing piece! although, it was short you found a perfect way to end it smoothly and clear-cut. defiantly worthy of a favorite! :)

This is a truly amazing piece! although, it was short you found a perfect way to end it smoothly and clear-cut. defiantly worthy of a favorite! :)