for Saints of Gold2/22/2020 c7 Anonymousme
Oh, this is lovely! Even if some are a little short, they're still beautifully written and presented. Please, please update soon!
Oh, this is lovely! Even if some are a little short, they're still beautifully written and presented. Please, please update soon!
2/17/2020 c7 
66BrokenKestral
Behold, I am doing a new thing; now it springs forth, do you not perceive it? I will make a way in the wilderness and rivers in the desert. - Isaiah 43:19
66BrokenKestralBehold, I am doing a new thing; now it springs forth, do you not perceive it? I will make a way in the wilderness and rivers in the desert. - Isaiah 43:19
4/30/2019 c6 Guest
Susan doesn't get enough love, it makes me happy to read stories where her gentleness is strength
Aslan's Daughter
Susan doesn't get enough love, it makes me happy to read stories where her gentleness is strength
Aslan's Daughter
4/30/2019 c2 Guest
The language, pacing and rhythm of this chapter is well done. A poetic rendition worthy of the golden age.
Aslan's Daughter
The language, pacing and rhythm of this chapter is well done. A poetic rendition worthy of the golden age.
Aslan's Daughter
4/22/2019 c6 BrokenKestral
I loved the quote at the beginning. I keep meaning to read more of his work, but it keeps getting pushed back to “someday.” I really liked how you portray that gentle strength takes risks but carries wisdom into them, and then receives the hurt of others with grace to give.
I loved the quote at the beginning. I keep meaning to read more of his work, but it keeps getting pushed back to “someday.” I really liked how you portray that gentle strength takes risks but carries wisdom into them, and then receives the hurt of others with grace to give.
8/15/2017 c5 Guest
He makes heroes. Wow. I loved that conclusion!
He makes heroes. Wow. I loved that conclusion!
8/15/2017 c3 Lydwina Marie
Aww, Peter is the best big brother. I hope you write more of him and Edmund!
Aww, Peter is the best big brother. I hope you write more of him and Edmund!
7/19/2017 c5 127meldahlie
Oh, I love this one! Dear Mr Tumnus! And his conclusion, too, entirely correct :)
127meldahlieOh, I love this one! Dear Mr Tumnus! And his conclusion, too, entirely correct :)
7/18/2017 c5 64Sophia the Scribe
Lovely! I think this was definitely a conversation that Tumnus and Edmund needed to have. Good job! Blessings, Sophia
64Sophia the ScribeLovely! I think this was definitely a conversation that Tumnus and Edmund needed to have. Good job! Blessings, Sophia