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8/18/2016 c2 16AliceHeart247
Another great chapter! You are very good in your spellchecking and wording. It is hard to write without using names directly so I commend you on your rising to the challenge. I look forward to reading more of this! The mystery is only deepening.
8/15/2016 c1 AliceHeart247
Oooh, I like where this could be headed. I look forward to reading more. You may want to put in a another horizontal bar between the first paragraph and the second, and there was a capitalization that needs to be fixed in the third paragraph for "with each passing minute Any warmth..." Just little suggestions. Hope you update soon!

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