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7/30/2018 c1 4-6-0-1-7-0-4
Good god... even when you try put them together, it's a half-ass attempt with no real effort put into it... you make it seem as if she did the wrong thing and should be ashamed of it... and they don't kiss because they've come to love each other by getting to know one another, fighting side by side, it just happens because they became infatuated. You have Snake Eyes being such a cold uncaring distant asshole, that it makes no sense that she would want to be with him at all or look at him in that way.

It doesn't make any sense that this was set before the events of the show. Are you forgetting what Jinx said to Scarlett?
"You know you're not like his other students. I've seen how he treats you… how he cares."
"Nah, I'm just high maintenance, that's all."

If they kissed, when she would she be shocked and say that? Why didn't she tell her or anyone else for that matter that their relationship wasn't just being close friends? Why would Snake Eyes leave when he saw her hugging Duke? Wouldn't he know that her heart was with him? Maybe one day you'll read G.I. Joe comic book when it was under Marvel and not only see better storylines, but better characterization writing of these two. Or who knows, maybe you would find ways of screwing that up as well...
9/10/2017 c1 2venusmitteer
i loved it.
8/18/2016 c1 13roguedoll
Welcome to the fandom very nice

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