
9/29/2017 c13
9Yellow Green Fish
It is a wonderful fanfic, characterization on point and great English! Though I'm wondering, why did Roland have a hatred for Neo when they are only the candidates? (Sorry for the short review, read it awhile back and I was too lazy to write one back then :)

It is a wonderful fanfic, characterization on point and great English! Though I'm wondering, why did Roland have a hatred for Neo when they are only the candidates? (Sorry for the short review, read it awhile back and I was too lazy to write one back then :)
9/23/2017 c13 Crystal
OMG those last few lines! XD Neo shot himself in the foot XD Totally love your story, keep up the good work!
OMG those last few lines! XD Neo shot himself in the foot XD Totally love your story, keep up the good work!
9/23/2017 c7 Crystal
Can't help but stop to review this chapter. Totally love all the other chappies so far, great work! This really brings out the feels TT I think you have done a wonderful job at bringing out their feelings, their thought processes, all the while staying true to the novel (as far as I can remember). Not to mention, great English! XD Keep up the good work~
Can't help but stop to review this chapter. Totally love all the other chappies so far, great work! This really brings out the feels TT I think you have done a wonderful job at bringing out their feelings, their thought processes, all the while staying true to the novel (as far as I can remember). Not to mention, great English! XD Keep up the good work~
9/23/2017 c13
37Alsheon
I'm surprised that I haven't post any review yet! Anyway, this story is a light of my gloomy day, so cute and adorable! Especially whenever it's Roland's And Grisia's chapter! Thank you so much for writing these OSs! I noticed LSK fandom is all about favs and follows, so I'll drop a review so I could cheer you on!

I'm surprised that I haven't post any review yet! Anyway, this story is a light of my gloomy day, so cute and adorable! Especially whenever it's Roland's And Grisia's chapter! Thank you so much for writing these OSs! I noticed LSK fandom is all about favs and follows, so I'll drop a review so I could cheer you on!
8/29/2016 c11 Latemacial
I love the time when Twelve Holy Knights of 38 generation were are knights-of-training, and here is so many thing which makes me happy - warm humor and serious themes and of course the relation between teachers and students and many other things. Thank you. Your stories as a rays of light. I'm sorry for my English
I love the time when Twelve Holy Knights of 38 generation were are knights-of-training, and here is so many thing which makes me happy - warm humor and serious themes and of course the relation between teachers and students and many other things. Thank you. Your stories as a rays of light. I'm sorry for my English
8/15/2016 c1 illvermore
Well , my English is not exactly "good" . But I would not stand if such a promising story was paused for lack of comments encentivo . So here I am ! And in the next chapter and the next I also will be present. Now on the introduction , I really liked it, is quite unique imagine their relationship when they were very young , and how formed the ties that bind them. If there was to give a score , your score would be maximum .
Well , my English is not exactly "good" . But I would not stand if such a promising story was paused for lack of comments encentivo . So here I am ! And in the next chapter and the next I also will be present. Now on the introduction , I really liked it, is quite unique imagine their relationship when they were very young , and how formed the ties that bind them. If there was to give a score , your score would be maximum .