9/26/2016 c5 1ShadedLyht
Sorry about my last review(I must be losing my mind or something). But I think I read one of the names wrong in the introductions and confused myself.
As for the chapter I liked having the short bits of everyone exploring and seeing their dialogue with one another.
I think Hibiko is my favorite so far, and I love the little cameo.
I think Hisoka would be in the Ff. But I can also see Noritaka in it too... I guess I'll just have to wait and see!
Till next time

9/23/2016 c5 37Yummy42
Lol, actually knowing who the attacker is worse knowing it's the victims themselves! It's sad to know that Ruruka had that much self-loathe to herself to do that...Well speaking of cute sea otters, there needs to be a part when Monomeep is ranting to the students about something but all they hear is the natural cute otter noises! XD Or whenever the first murder is committed he says, "This is complete otter chaos!" Yay for letting Kona have her jokes and paramedic moments! Haha, allthough Yuriy stacking those chairs is something i would do tbh, probably not as wobbly though! I am here for the Gundam reference and the introduction of a vice principal into the game! Hmm, that makes me wonder if there's multiple masterminds or if they just had a bit too much free-time with designs lol. That's so messed up on crushing their hope with the radio mess but i guess you could say that the reality of the situation is...sinking in? Also, dude school gets the best of everyone with taking up time, so your update schedule is understandable! Haha, great job with the chapter as always and can't wait for the free time chapter in the next two weeks!

9/23/2016 c5 GRbKY DELETED
This is me, reviewing on your chapter. It is some normal exploration and Mizuumi nice addition to the family, and way to be a killjoy, little creeping me there. Typos I spot: treate (They should treat' If I am not mistaken ) and doub (doubt). I'd like to see more of our God complex boy.

Spoiler talk. Damnit I dislike the closure of Zetsubou-Hen. The brainwash to remnants of despair is just not enough, not grand enough for me to be a reason of joyous despair (I expect them to be depressing despair but nah.) And Chiaki's dead is probably most depressing one. She just wants to protect and be together with her classmates and Junko makes their classmates enjoy the despair while it should be hope to fight back. And Izuru keeps her hairpin that's my ship sailing. Mirai-Hen's method of killing is predictable, but don't expect Juzobro will be the bro. I don't dislike him from the very start even he is a prick, and this act of his adds factor for me to like him. Let's wait for the future. Spoiler Ends.

Keep writing!

9/8/2016 c4 4PlayGirlKitty
AHH! Juli! Did they miss on purpose, or did Julian manage to dodge it? XD I love that you added that in though. And I htink Hibiko with the 'I am god' would irritate Julian to no end. He'd be like: ... You are not a god. I can kill you at any time! (In his head obviously. XD) I freaking LOVE this!

9/8/2016 c4 37Yummy42
AHHH how cute, a sea otter! I'm so used to seeing them looking like they're smiling all the time and being graceful in the water so it's pretty hard imagining a despair Sea Otter! And about your MC being multiple people, ohh okay that really makes sense and can see where you're coming from on that! Welp everyone knows the rules now and I can't with that slice and dice katana warning, XD. Ohhh just a random thing, idk why I casually thought this now but you know how whenever it's punishment time and the culprit gets dragged by a chain? Well since they're underwater what if they get dragged by seaweed? Idk just a suggestion and speaking of the new future episode...Yeah, I mean I didn't really like Ruruka but nobody deserves that kind of brutal af death! I wonder why the attacker was more brutal and unorganized this time? It wasn't a stab to the heart like it usually is but instead in the stomach and she didn't get hanged up? Hmm, oh well we'll find out soon enough but Kyoko omfg that was depressing! I haven't cried at her death because I'm in denial that the cure W thing will work! Ohhh I saw Nerve when it first came out and it was such a good movie! It had a really interesting concept with technology but that movie seems like it could actually happen in real life because we have people smart enough to do that nowadays...Anyways, great chapter as always even though it was kinda short with a couple typos! Can't wait for the next update!

9/7/2016 c4 1bluesnowkitty
Yeah new chapter! So far pretty standard DR stuff, which will probably change when the free time comes up soon, I presume exploration will be the next chapter though, maybe it'll be a good idea to write both maybe a free time event with the person the next Mc will be exploring with ;). Anyway a few spelling errors here and there, though they're not too serious since you probably wrote them based off their pronounciation (or as you mentioned before maybe their similarities to the French language). An example is when you spelled committee as committy. The reason why it's wrong is because '-ty' would be pronounced as 'tye' since both 't's are pronounced as 'com-mit-tee'. Also, 'doub' should 'doubt' as the 't' in here is silent (I don't know why for this, but yeah it is). Finally, there are just a few minor grammatical errors, and while they are technically wrong, they are contextually wrong. For example, when Monomeep says 'let's make it a warning', it should be that, since he is referring to the incident of Julian nearly being sliced, he is talking about something that happened a distance away from him, which would look something like 'let's make that (incident) a warning' where 'incident' isn't written since it is being referred to by Monomeep. Anyway, besides these few minor things, loved the story flow so far, I like how you include various character subtleties as reactions to Monomeep's speech, like Bianca's bubble popping and staring, as while she doesn't say anything, it conveys a feeling of her tension as well as stimulates the imagination with a sound, which is also shown in the start of the chapter with fhe description of Monomeep's voice. Also, perfect portrayal of Miisa so far, this is just creator's bias but I really hope to see more of her haha :X Also really taking a liking Hibiko, his god-complex is just too entertaining xD Finally, great to hear that you love eastern stuff. Honestly it's also a little ostracized here in Singapore, even though it's limited to anime and for some reason nobody bats an eyelid when people go crazy over Korean Dramas, but it's sort of a social expectation (I say that but really it's even considered taboo) not to talk about anime in public. Dumb right? People still find my monokuma jacket to be cool though :D Anyway, stay strong! :D Just like me as I try to beat fire emblem and their luck based system. DAMN IT IT WAS 20% HOW DID YOU HIT THAT?!(it really happens...). Have a good week ahead!

9/7/2016 c3 ShadedLyht
Sorry for the late review!I've been busy all week and am now only getting some free time...
But anyway, now that we've had all the student introductions I have to say that I love how diverse everyone is and how no two characters seem alike( so good job on your selection of them!) .
The only thing that I have to say I didn't like about the chapter was how the two groups where introduced to each other. Instead of stating that they were mingling around you just had Maki yell out everyones names and that was that. But really other than that I have no problems with the chapter.
Till next time (Which is today/tonight)! Hopefully my next review won't be a week later