9/4/2018 c1 whlRk
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9/2/2018 c1 AVIK5
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7/22/2018 c8 James Birdsong
Heh cool story
Heh cool story
10/11/2017 c4 october 31
please continue the way it ends is like cliff huger and it Cainta hard no to want more
please continue the way it ends is like cliff huger and it Cainta hard no to want more
8/14/2017 c4 Guest
I would love to keep reading
I would love to keep reading
8/4/2017 c4 Guest
Loved this!
Loved this!
7/6/2017 c4 deletedinactivew0001110101010
First let me say your grammar is atrocious, but it's at least to the point where I can follow the story no problem. And I loved your story. The emotions and train of thoughts you convey really pull the story along.
First let me say your grammar is atrocious, but it's at least to the point where I can follow the story no problem. And I loved your story. The emotions and train of thoughts you convey really pull the story along.