for Lucy becomes a Soul Reaper5/19/2020 c2 guest
seprated the paragrapg it hard to keep track
seprated the paragrapg it hard to keep track
11/27/2019 c1 Coco
This too long and can you break it apart and it’s a really good story
This too long and can you break it apart and it’s a really good story
2/2/2018 c5 KJacket
I highly suggest separating into more paragraphs, it is extremely hard to read huge blocks of text.
I highly suggest separating into more paragraphs, it is extremely hard to read huge blocks of text.
12/8/2017 c9 
4DawsonRose03
Good luck. Hope it goes well. If you don't mind my asking, why do you need a double lung transplant? Anyhow, have a merry Christmas and a happy new year.
4DawsonRose03Good luck. Hope it goes well. If you don't mind my asking, why do you need a double lung transplant? Anyhow, have a merry Christmas and a happy new year.
10/15/2017 c9 2cassidymag00
Damn author. Good luck hope you feel better soon and the transplant goes well.
2cassidymag00Damn author. Good luck hope you feel better soon and the transplant goes well.
10/13/2017 c9 Shadow Wolf 15846
I'm sad to hear that your not well. I hope that everything goes well, and I'm looking foward to when you writte again.
I'm sad to hear that your not well. I hope that everything goes well, and I'm looking foward to when you writte again.
10/13/2017 c9 sofsof2015
I really hope you feel better. Hope the double lung transplant work. Good luck and get better. My prayer go out to you.
I really hope you feel better. Hope the double lung transplant work. Good luck and get better. My prayer go out to you.
7/12/2017 c1 Guest
lucy has as much magic as a kage level person of naruto are a wizard saint of about 3
lucy has as much magic as a kage level person of naruto are a wizard saint of about 3
7/7/2017 c7 FairyTail78
You said that almost a year ago and you still haven't updated.
What the hell happed? I Felly want to know what happens next.
You said that almost a year ago and you still haven't updated.
What the hell happed? I Felly want to know what happens next.
7/7/2017 c7 4DawsonRose03
You said that almost a year ago and you still haven't updated.
What the hell happed? I really want to know what happens next.
I also have a suggestion. When writing try to make shorter paragraphs.
It will make the story easier to read for anyone who reads it. Anyways,
hope you update soon, or whatever is keeping you so busy let's up.
Sincerly- Fairys Tail78
4DawsonRose03You said that almost a year ago and you still haven't updated.
What the hell happed? I really want to know what happens next.
I also have a suggestion. When writing try to make shorter paragraphs.
It will make the story easier to read for anyone who reads it. Anyways,
hope you update soon, or whatever is keeping you so busy let's up.
Sincerly- Fairys Tail78
7/4/2017 c7 Guest
please update soon
please update soon
5/31/2017 c1 Guest
*looks at author wryly* Ever heard of a paragraph?
*looks at author wryly* Ever heard of a paragraph?