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8/26/2016 c1 31iHateFridays
Hello! This is pretty cool, though I recommend you use paragraphs and start a new line every time a different character speaks. I haven't looked at the other chapters yet, so you might've changed that, but that's just a suggestion. Good luck with your story! '

~Ponystories
8/20/2016 c4 Ryan
Yo cool story bro!

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