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5/22/2021 c1 Guest
IDIOT FANFIC
4/11/2021 c1 Tyfli barda
A very enjoyable story, with nostalgia done in an honorable merging way. It is not the most well written story but you managed to introduce different franchises in quite the interesting and funny plotlines. More flesh out characters and environment would help to make the story so much better, although your dialogue was decent enough. A rewrite in which you can evolve this story would be much appreciated but all in all a good fanfiction story.
2/6/2021 c6 Netchka
Great chapter and story. Really looking forward to finding out where Allen goes to next and when he comes back to the SGC.
9/25/2020 c6 ak
bonne fic!
6/5/2020 c6 bruceleeroythelastdragon
AWESOME STORY!
5/10/2019 c5 Chronus1326
You like reviews, I like updates.
7/11/2018 c1 Guest
I like the idea. The spelling sucks. Marine isn't even a hard word to spell. Allen also reveals way to much to quickly.
10/20/2016 c1 2frustratedmind
Just halfway through the 1st chapter. Loving it already..
10/16/2016 c6 22I Hate Snatch Steal
You did a very good job. A power like Fruger's could easily be mishandled by an incompetent author, but you did great.
10/6/2016 c1 4Dur'id the Druid
Ok, nope. Read first chapter, and it is so full of typos and shallow plot and charcters it is embarrassing. I don't normally like rewrites, but this story would really benefit if you take a step back and really think through what you want to do with it. What is here now is just amateur Mary Sue fic.
9/26/2016 c6 Guest Q
P.S. It would be a crime not to have a sequel to this story. Kudos!
9/23/2016 c6 thunder18
Great chapter Update soon
9/23/2016 c1 StoneTheLoner
Bugs me how easily he reveals stuff. He doesn't come off as smart at all.
9/23/2016 c6 celf
i love this story.
it a great idea and would love to see more like this.
9/23/2016 c6 Guest Q
Great story, kinda sad its over though. :( Any chance of a sequel?

And to clarify, the "advanced" tech from nBSG, barring the FTL drive, is practically useless in open battle. Resurrection ships/hubs are fraking big targets, Skinjobs are only useful for spying, Hybrids are too horrific for most people to look at (and Goa'uld computers are able to hold Thor's consciousness at one point), V-World is the Colonial version of the Internet, and the regenerating hulls needs weeks/months outside of a battle to fully heal (unless your a Vorlon or Shadow). In comparison, original BSG has energy weapons, able to travel at light speed, and have some kind of shield (never was clarified if they were repurposed navigational deflectors or an actual energy shield).
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