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4/21/2019 c1 3decidueye1234
4/2/2019 c1 Guest
I think I lost iq points by reading this steaming pile of shit
10/2/2018 c2 1Wicked.A
storys with kumagawa are always awesome
12/13/2016 c2 Hypothetical Spiritual Entity
Is this over now? Because Betelgeuse turning up like that gives the impression that something's supposed to follow.

Anyway, I like what you've done with this story. Your writing in general is fairly good, and I've only noticed a few minor grammatical errors here and there. I also like seeing the odd Kumagawa crossover here and there; adding him to lighthearted settings darkens things up, adding him to dark settings brightens the place (even if it's only through trolling), he's like a tone adjustment expert.
10/26/2016 c1 Lucas Schifer
Very interesting, I hope post more chapters.

_All-Fiction in Fanfiction Bitch_
9/23/2016 c2 Eurigos
Very interesting, I look forward to more chapters
9/17/2016 c2 llat-2
Echidna's Gospel book would have given Roswal (Who sent Elsa after Emilia to get Subaru) some clues about Misogi before they met. Roswal was pretty much a total bastard in case the clown getup didn't tip you off (Also him saying to Subaru's face that Subaru was his property). What Roswal did in arc 4 was most unkind and he knew about Subaru's time travel so he even murders Ram in one loop.
9/16/2016 c2 Volfy790
Nice chapter
9/15/2016 c2 Shirosaki Kizuro
I never would have thought there will be a second chapter, I really appreciate it ze XD
8/30/2016 c1 Jack Whitty
Can you make a Teen Titans/ Medoka Box crossover Fanfiction.
8/30/2016 c1 cards308
Loved it.
8/22/2016 c1 MFffer
The world mindfucks Subaru, but Kumagawa mindfucks the world.
8/22/2016 c1 2Imaginations Broken
You nailed Kumagawa's character... And it was good? I guess?
8/21/2016 c1 llat-2
... You didn't read Arc 4 of the Web Novel did you?
8/21/2016 c1 szmtex
THAT WAS GODLY! kumagawa rlz
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