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1/17/2017 c1 1ManleyTogekiss
I wouldn't blame it on the writer from what I can tell TV Tokyo executives control how is the main character thus if ash can win and leave the show all the writer did was write HOW ash would lose otherwise great story
9/12/2016 c1 Soulstealer8
Ash didn't look like he took his loss that hard in the show, but I feel that Ash needs what you wrote in your story, you wrote a wonderful piece.
Sincerely,
*SS8*
8/22/2016 c1 Mega M
this was great you should do another chapter. it was bs how ash greninja didn't take down mega charizard x with that attack the writers really need stop riding on pikachu
8/20/2016 c1 Salty
Wow, Seriously, where did you get this information? can you please post a link?
8/21/2016 c1 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Cool work here, and yeah, it seems the writers just don't want Ash to win.

Keep the good writing.
8/20/2016 c1 6Juubi-K
This was quite painful, though the ending was a relief. For Ash, after everything he's been through and achieved, having to both lose and run the social media gauntlet is bound to be soul-destroying.

I see what you mean about the series. It wouldn't be the first franchise to get hopelessly stuck in a mile-deep rut; though this takes the biscuit. Letting Ash have his dream, and let someone else take up his mantle, might have given the franchise a new lease of life.

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