for Goku Daughter of Bardock10/13/2017 c5 Gokuu the Carrot
Forgot your password?... wow
-hayabusa girl
Forgot your password?... wow
-hayabusa girl
1/29/2017 c1 Hi I'm back
Hello just to clarify that I will not continue this story because well I uh forgot my password.
Hello just to clarify that I will not continue this story because well I uh forgot my password.
9/13/2016 c6 hayabusa girl
NOO NO WAY NO WAY NI WAY HOW CIUKD YOU!?
NOO NO WAY NO WAY NI WAY HOW CIUKD YOU!?
9/11/2016 c7 Guest
You seriously suck at this. Please, stop.
You seriously suck at this. Please, stop.
9/11/2016 c5 
4Augenis
This story.
It's bad, it's genuinely *bad*.
There is barely any characterization, the writing is non-existent, all the characters act out of character and have nothing to say, all action is conveyed through asterisk play, the jokes are cringeworthy or TFS repeats at best and terrible at worst, and the worst part, in my opinion, is that it just has nothing to tell.
There is nothing interesting going on, this story just has no life to it. It's just retelling the same FemGoku treads that have been already explored many times before and in a much better act of writing.
There is a LOT of work needed here to raise this story from garbage tier.
4AugenisThis story.
It's bad, it's genuinely *bad*.
There is barely any characterization, the writing is non-existent, all the characters act out of character and have nothing to say, all action is conveyed through asterisk play, the jokes are cringeworthy or TFS repeats at best and terrible at worst, and the worst part, in my opinion, is that it just has nothing to tell.
There is nothing interesting going on, this story just has no life to it. It's just retelling the same FemGoku treads that have been already explored many times before and in a much better act of writing.
There is a LOT of work needed here to raise this story from garbage tier.
9/1/2016 c5 hayabusa girl
Oh you watched that yeah db super really surprises me I was soooooo surprised and super mad(ha pun) and I like this story pretty good and funny
Oh you watched that yeah db super really surprises me I was soooooo surprised and super mad(ha pun) and I like this story pretty good and funny