for The king of the west11/17/2022 c1 YourstoriesSuck
That was lame don't keep the chapters coming.
That was lame don't keep the chapters coming.
8/16/2019 c3 omegaderose
better go and write on wattpad, wattpad is a better side if your chapters are so short
better go and write on wattpad, wattpad is a better side if your chapters are so short
12/8/2017 c3 Guest
Why even bother with this it's too short to even be a story at all it's more of a summary than a story.
Why even bother with this it's too short to even be a story at all it's more of a summary than a story.
6/1/2017 c1 
1Isshiki Satoshi
What I 'thing' is that you need to get a better beta...come on! if you know your english why won't you? and I'm sure you do...
1Isshiki SatoshiWhat I 'thing' is that you need to get a better beta...come on! if you know your english why won't you? and I'm sure you do...
12/3/2016 c3 marquis.shax
ok that makes no sense how would it take so long for them to "search" for Naruto? The retrieval mission was BEFORE he left on his so called training trip with Jiraiya so they should've known Naruto was in Konoha so it makes no sense how anyone could be searching for him when allt hey had to do was sneak into the village an confirm he does indeed live there and then make arrangements with him to leave the village
ok that makes no sense how would it take so long for them to "search" for Naruto? The retrieval mission was BEFORE he left on his so called training trip with Jiraiya so they should've known Naruto was in Konoha so it makes no sense how anyone could be searching for him when allt hey had to do was sneak into the village an confirm he does indeed live there and then make arrangements with him to leave the village
9/17/2016 c1 5DanteAzel
The idea is very common while the royalty angle is new it is still a common idea. So what you need to do is revamp the story. Focus on the royalty angle and take it slowly. Like your other Naruto story it has a lot of potential but it needs work.
5DanteAzelThe idea is very common while the royalty angle is new it is still a common idea. So what you need to do is revamp the story. Focus on the royalty angle and take it slowly. Like your other Naruto story it has a lot of potential but it needs work.
8/21/2016 c1 Guest
Not another dumbass author that doesn't have any brains in his head. Come I seen your review and I know for a fact you read a lot fanfictions, but instead of using your own ideas you instead just copy and paste other authors stories. Are you that much a idiot that you cannot think of anything original instead of this garbage you call a story. Get the fuck off this website loser.
Yes this is a flame youd duck sucking cancer bitch.
Not another dumbass author that doesn't have any brains in his head. Come I seen your review and I know for a fact you read a lot fanfictions, but instead of using your own ideas you instead just copy and paste other authors stories. Are you that much a idiot that you cannot think of anything original instead of this garbage you call a story. Get the fuck off this website loser.
Yes this is a flame youd duck sucking cancer bitch.