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8/16/2019 c3 omegaderose
better go and write on wattpad, wattpad is a better side if your chapters are so short
5/20/2018 c3 shedges19
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3/27/2018 c3 Eliazar Chandra
Please write more
2/28/2018 c1 Eliazar Chandra
Can you please release the next chapter?
12/8/2017 c3 Guest
Why even bother with this it's too short to even be a story at all it's more of a summary than a story.
10/10/2017 c3 75Perseus12
Wowsers! Please continue the story, the excitement thrills me!
10/3/2017 c3 4cyiusblack
update soon
6/28/2017 c1 Sonderistic
Why do I always see that was good keep the chapters coming
6/1/2017 c1 1Isshiki Satoshi
What I 'thing' is that you need to get a better beta...come on! if you know your english why won't you? and I'm sure you do...
12/3/2016 c3 marquis.shax
ok that makes no sense how would it take so long for them to "search" for Naruto? The retrieval mission was BEFORE he left on his so called training trip with Jiraiya so they should've known Naruto was in Konoha so it makes no sense how anyone could be searching for him when allt hey had to do was sneak into the village an confirm he does indeed live there and then make arrangements with him to leave the village
11/13/2016 c3 god of all
Great chapter and story so far pleases continue this story soon.
9/17/2016 c1 5DanteAzel
The idea is very common while the royalty angle is new it is still a common idea. So what you need to do is revamp the story. Focus on the royalty angle and take it slowly. Like your other Naruto story it has a lot of potential but it needs work.
8/21/2016 c1 Guest
Not another dumbass author that doesn't have any brains in his head. Come I seen your review and I know for a fact you read a lot fanfictions, but instead of using your own ideas you instead just copy and paste other authors stories. Are you that much a idiot that you cannot think of anything original instead of this garbage you call a story. Get the fuck off this website loser.

Yes this is a flame youd duck sucking cancer bitch.
8/21/2016 c1 5Soledge1
your spelling needs a little work but its a good story so far. you may want to make it a little longer next time.

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