for END'S Trigger9/16/2016 c1 Noodleeee Heartt
Oh mY god so many feelz right nowwww this is beautifulll make moreeee plleeeeassseee
Oh mY god so many feelz right nowwww this is beautifulll make moreeee plleeeeassseee
8/22/2016 c1 
8Johnny Spectre
I will admit that it is a unique take, and I'm curious as to how it will continue
8Johnny SpectreI will admit that it is a unique take, and I'm curious as to how it will continue
8/22/2016 c1 mariah.carmichael.3
So is F.R going to try and change the past by stopping the baby's death? Lucy's death? Or even the baby being born all together? Or a completely different route and stop something else involving natsus future change
So is F.R going to try and change the past by stopping the baby's death? Lucy's death? Or even the baby being born all together? Or a completely different route and stop something else involving natsus future change
8/21/2016 c1 Guest
Man, I feel so sorry for Natsu in this: Loosing your mate and child would drive ANYONE over the edge of despair.
And Lisanna and her sister sounded VERY selfish in this future. Trying to force Natsu to love Lisanna and have her become Nashi's mother a month after Lucy died wasn't helping Natsu. It was just Lisanna trying to get her childhood promise. And while Lucy would had wanted Natsu to be happy, Lisanna and Mira trying to get him to like Lisanna a month after she died is not only an insult to her memory. It also makes it look like they were waiting for something to happen, just so Lisanna can move right on in and take Lucy's place.
And I admit, I hope for a NaLu ending. Cause what's Rouge going to do with Natsu once Lucy is dead? Force him to like another? Or make him live his life alone?
Man, I feel so sorry for Natsu in this: Loosing your mate and child would drive ANYONE over the edge of despair.
And Lisanna and her sister sounded VERY selfish in this future. Trying to force Natsu to love Lisanna and have her become Nashi's mother a month after Lucy died wasn't helping Natsu. It was just Lisanna trying to get her childhood promise. And while Lucy would had wanted Natsu to be happy, Lisanna and Mira trying to get him to like Lisanna a month after she died is not only an insult to her memory. It also makes it look like they were waiting for something to happen, just so Lisanna can move right on in and take Lucy's place.
And I admit, I hope for a NaLu ending. Cause what's Rouge going to do with Natsu once Lucy is dead? Force him to like another? Or make him live his life alone?
8/21/2016 c1 Athena Minev
Wow...
Really. The story, the plot is so interesting.
Well, I can't say much. But, I hope you will update it as soon as possible you can.
Keep writing.
See ya...
Wow...
Really. The story, the plot is so interesting.
Well, I can't say much. But, I hope you will update it as soon as possible you can.
Keep writing.
See ya...
8/21/2016 c1 Guest
Yep, this is sick! And i am waiting for a sickening update!
Yep, this is sick! And i am waiting for a sickening update!
8/20/2016 c1 guest
I hope it NaLu because if Lucy is natsu mate, even if Rogue tries to get with her to never let END DAY happen. she still will have a connection stronger to Natsu as will Natsu so idk. I hope Rogue can save them, instead of killing Lucy, cause I want Nashi to live and be with both her parents. Keep up the good work!
I hope it NaLu because if Lucy is natsu mate, even if Rogue tries to get with her to never let END DAY happen. she still will have a connection stronger to Natsu as will Natsu so idk. I hope Rogue can save them, instead of killing Lucy, cause I want Nashi to live and be with both her parents. Keep up the good work!
8/20/2016 c1 4G3r1k
Don't know how i feel about this yet. It seem like it will go places. I'm looking forward to see how this plays out.
4G3r1kDon't know how i feel about this yet. It seem like it will go places. I'm looking forward to see how this plays out.
8/20/2016 c1 StarReader1
Dude...this is dark..-~-...BUT AWESOME..NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!
Dude...this is dark..-~-...BUT AWESOME..NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!