for Second Time Around10/21/2019 c15 tmtcltb
It’s interesting because you were giving us more and more detail, and yet the story continues to get more and more complex. Hope to see you update again soon!
It’s interesting because you were giving us more and more detail, and yet the story continues to get more and more complex. Hope to see you update again soon!
10/21/2019 c14 tmtcltb
Well that was a horrifying development.
Well that was a horrifying development.
10/21/2019 c12 tmtcltb
A good reminder that even though Tom has changed his ways, and Cadillac Prime didn’t happen, he still does have history to contend with.
A good reminder that even though Tom has changed his ways, and Cadillac Prime didn’t happen, he still does have history to contend with.
10/21/2019 c11 tmtcltb
Poor Tom. I can *feel* his confusion and frustration. Although I did laugh about theleola root.
Poor Tom. I can *feel* his confusion and frustration. Although I did laugh about theleola root.
10/8/2019 c15 Juddysbuddy
I'm so glad you updated this. I hope we won't have to wait too long for the next update! Thank you for sharing.
I'm so glad you updated this. I hope we won't have to wait too long for the next update! Thank you for sharing.
6/17/2018 c9 Juddysbuddy
Wow! Tom's memories are really confusing. It's interesting that he keeps speaking in the language of his rescuers and remembering B'Elanna.
Wow! Tom's memories are really confusing. It's interesting that he keeps speaking in the language of his rescuers and remembering B'Elanna.
6/17/2018 c10 tmtcltb
Moms extra confidence, given the memories he has, is coming through. He is saving lives, but is also changing history. Makes me wonder how much things can change without changing Tom’s own future
Moms extra confidence, given the memories he has, is coming through. He is saving lives, but is also changing history. Makes me wonder how much things can change without changing Tom’s own future
6/17/2018 c9 tmtcltb
No wonder Tom is struggling with all of his thoughts so jumbled!
No wonder Tom is struggling with all of his thoughts so jumbled!
6/9/2018 c8 Juddysbuddy
The rearranging that you did is great and I appreciate the labeling of the sections so I know what is the new timeline. It was interesting to see that Tom retains Vahr's memories (at least partly) and that Thriss's older brother was the boy that was tortured in front of Tommy. Thank you!
The rearranging that you did is great and I appreciate the labeling of the sections so I know what is the new timeline. It was interesting to see that Tom retains Vahr's memories (at least partly) and that Thriss's older brother was the boy that was tortured in front of Tommy. Thank you!
6/3/2018 c7 tmtcltb
That ending with Tom playing the partyboy was sad. The sense of loss he must be feeling would be overwhelming.
That ending with Tom playing the partyboy was sad. The sense of loss he must be feeling would be overwhelming.
6/3/2018 c6 tmtcltb
(I had to log out as I already reviewed prior chapter 6.) It's fascinating seeing Tom bounce from one time to another and still somehow managed to stay focused enough that people don't think he's crazy. Yet anyway.
(I had to log out as I already reviewed prior chapter 6.) It's fascinating seeing Tom bounce from one time to another and still somehow managed to stay focused enough that people don't think he's crazy. Yet anyway.
5/29/2018 c18 Juddysbuddy
I'm so glad you updated with two nice long chapters. Poor little Tommy really went through a lot of awful stuff, but he learned a lot about different species that will be useful. Thank you for writing.
I'm so glad you updated with two nice long chapters. Poor little Tommy really went through a lot of awful stuff, but he learned a lot about different species that will be useful. Thank you for writing.
5/24/2018 c2 Stepheniebates
I like the story but it jumps around to much im pretty lost at this point
I like the story but it jumps around to much im pretty lost at this point
5/22/2018 c18 max2013
Tom trust your instincts-something is NOT right! two chapter update-happy dance!
Tom trust your instincts-something is NOT right! two chapter update-happy dance!