for Heart of the Free Wielder(Key Paladin Path)6/16/2017 c2 
8MasterCaedus
Hey, sorry this review took so long. I really liked this chapter, especially that you put so much time into fleshing out the relationships that Matthew has with the main and side characters of Destiny Island, as I feel that will make the inevitable separation from them much more weighty. The fights were also entertaining, and I feel you captured the characters' styles and attitudes from KH really well. All in all, it was great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
8MasterCaedusHey, sorry this review took so long. I really liked this chapter, especially that you put so much time into fleshing out the relationships that Matthew has with the main and side characters of Destiny Island, as I feel that will make the inevitable separation from them much more weighty. The fights were also entertaining, and I feel you captured the characters' styles and attitudes from KH really well. All in all, it was great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
4/19/2017 c2 24SpringBorn
Loved this chapter! The sparring matches were some of my favorite parts to it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
24SpringBornLoved this chapter! The sparring matches were some of my favorite parts to it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
9/8/2016 c1 64Strike Faster Than Starlight
Hey bro here I am!(a little late I know xD), the prologue is pretty good, I don't have any knowlegde in Kingdom hearts or elsword but I'm enjoying it already, and Matthew is proving to be a nice OC, I liked the part were he asks if he can take the sword haha. keep it up :)
64Strike Faster Than StarlightHey bro here I am!(a little late I know xD), the prologue is pretty good, I don't have any knowlegde in Kingdom hearts or elsword but I'm enjoying it already, and Matthew is proving to be a nice OC, I liked the part were he asks if he can take the sword haha. keep it up :)
8/22/2016 c1 8MasterCaedus
It's great to finally see this! I really like it so far, and I found Matthew's remarks on the events of the Dive to the Heart pretty funny. After all, any person going through a video game intro in real life would probably be more weirded out by being told about mechanics than by the fantasy of what could easily be passed off as a dream.
I've been reading up a bit on Elsword to prepare for this. It's got a lot, so I'll probably be catching up alongside this, so I'm excited.
Can't wait to see more!
8MasterCaedusIt's great to finally see this! I really like it so far, and I found Matthew's remarks on the events of the Dive to the Heart pretty funny. After all, any person going through a video game intro in real life would probably be more weirded out by being told about mechanics than by the fantasy of what could easily be passed off as a dream.
I've been reading up a bit on Elsword to prepare for this. It's got a lot, so I'll probably be catching up alongside this, so I'm excited.
Can't wait to see more!
8/21/2016 c1 24SpringBorn
Interesting way to start of the prologue. I liked it. Had a little hard time keeping up with the reading in the beginng but enjoyed it greatly. I really like the OC so far and can't wait to read more.
24SpringBornInteresting way to start of the prologue. I liked it. Had a little hard time keeping up with the reading in the beginng but enjoyed it greatly. I really like the OC so far and can't wait to read more.