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10/4/2016 c8 chelsbaby
I like this story so much! I'm cracking up at her bacon aversion! It's so funny how honed in she is. Yay, they're moving to NY!
10/4/2016 c8 3jessec12
Awesome that they're moving!
10/4/2016 c8 RhizOneill
They are moving to New York. What an awesome chapter. I really like this chapter so much. I can't wait to read the next chapter soon.
9/28/2016 c7 Nancy
Happy! Happy! Great. More soon.
9/28/2016 c7 RhizOneill
Awww so beautiful. I love that Luke mad a crib and rocking chair for them. Love this chapter so much! I can't wait to read the next chapter soon.
9/28/2016 c7 jordana60
I love that Jess is so into their pregnancy. It's so cool when a flat stomach starts to get the slightest rounded bump, and the fact that Jess notices and appreciated it is awesome. The way they they told the second round of people about the baby, with the video was genius! Sounds like they had a merry Christmas, especially with Luke's crib and chair. I cant wait for New Years Eve!
9/28/2016 c7 jessec12
Love it!
9/28/2016 c7 Elsasi
I think it's time for a plot twist ... Nothing too dramatic but something... ;)
9/28/2016 c7 bellapaige88
He's such a great dad to her and is gonna be an amazing grandfather.
9/27/2016 c7 3RHatch89
Awesome update :)
9/21/2016 c6 Guest
Everybody and everything is great. Glad that they have a nice Thanksgiving and that the girls are up for some Black Friday shopping and specials. Hope that the pregnancy goes well. More soon please.
9/23/2016 c6 jordana60
You're doing great with the pregnancy but there are a few 6 weeks pregnant,your weight doesn't change, let alone need bigger clothes- sometimes really the people never need maternity clothes. and the cravings ,although in few they might, don't start till about the 8th morning sickness can happen at 6 weeks though; my doctor used to tell me that the worse it was, the stronger the pregnancy, althoughI think it was just trying to make me feel better! I do like the fact that they aren't telling other people until the 2nd trimester, not only cause anything can happen, but also it makes the pregnancy seem twice as long when people know.I have 3 kids, soI can relate! These are all little things and don't change the integrity of the story, which is really great. I'm excited for New Year Eve in New York and for the pregnancy to progress. I love seeing Lit as parents to be!
9/22/2016 c6 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.

You’re gonna be a grandpa Luke!

He can even take his niece or nephew clubbing when they’re both older.

Grandpa Luke would love to make one!

Google works for me.
9/22/2016 c5 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.

With your mum it was apples, with you it’s carrots.

Yeah, she threw up the cake to make room for the candy.

Me & my partner mix m & m’s and skittles with popcorn at the movies.

Sweet potato fries are the best!

Please be twins! One of each!
9/22/2016 c6 Droolia
It's so funny that you're childless because when I read about the maternity bands, the first thought that entered my mind was, "hey, she's been through pregnancy before." Lol.
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