for It Still Works8/26/2016 c1 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.
Wow … a year!
I’t a week .. I’ve gone almost 2 without my partner.
Avocado is yuck!
Jess is every girl's, dream guy.
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.
Wow … a year!
I’t a week .. I’ve gone almost 2 without my partner.
Avocado is yuck!
Jess is every girl's, dream guy.
8/22/2016 c1 
3jessec12
Yay, so excited you started this story! Loved their anniversary weekend and can't wait to see what the note said.
3jessec12Yay, so excited you started this story! Loved their anniversary weekend and can't wait to see what the note said.
8/22/2016 c1 jordana60
It's amazing how you have incorporated some of the little things about them, like the hot dogs and the park and gave them your own twist. What a wonderful anniversary weekend. I have actually been to Serendipitys and have had their frozen hot chocolate, and can't imagine a better place for Rory and Jess to have dessert. So I'm thinking the envelope either has something to do with work, or Rory's pregnant, and I can't wait to see what's next!. By the way, great title to the story.
It's amazing how you have incorporated some of the little things about them, like the hot dogs and the park and gave them your own twist. What a wonderful anniversary weekend. I have actually been to Serendipitys and have had their frozen hot chocolate, and can't imagine a better place for Rory and Jess to have dessert. So I'm thinking the envelope either has something to do with work, or Rory's pregnant, and I can't wait to see what's next!. By the way, great title to the story.