
9/18/2024 c65 dekuton
ok. good entry. im a lil annoyed youre making the blood raven thievery meme canon but its such a minor part of this fic its easy to let it go. i like the blood ravens. a good bit honestly. id rather not see em get shat on but eh whatever. looking forward to more of this fic regardless.
ok. good entry. im a lil annoyed youre making the blood raven thievery meme canon but its such a minor part of this fic its easy to let it go. i like the blood ravens. a good bit honestly. id rather not see em get shat on but eh whatever. looking forward to more of this fic regardless.
9/18/2024 c65 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing weaver planning a massive relocation campaign for the people in terra
always fun to the the antics of the spiders wonder if belladona will plan chase down the thiefs as a private eye :D
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing weaver planning a massive relocation campaign for the people in terra
always fun to the the antics of the spiders wonder if belladona will plan chase down the thiefs as a private eye :D
9/18/2024 c65
2Zeru'Xil
As ever my joy at a new chapter can only be matched by the despair of ending it

As ever my joy at a new chapter can only be matched by the despair of ending it
9/18/2024 c65
5Korraganitar the NightShadow
Glorious Escalation! An excellent chapter again! Can't wait for more!

Glorious Escalation! An excellent chapter again! Can't wait for more!
9/18/2024 c65 Donar
A great chapter, had a lot of fun reading it :D
Looking forward to your next one.
Greetings
Donar
A great chapter, had a lot of fun reading it :D
Looking forward to your next one.
Greetings
Donar
9/18/2024 c64
2greasy snivellus
i missed your update andnow i am rereading the whole story cuz my memory doodoo all i remembernow is i love your story

i missed your update andnow i am rereading the whole story cuz my memory doodoo all i remembernow is i love your story
9/18/2024 c65
5Dragon lord Syed 101
Good chapter Cawl is on Nyx, Dorn is freaking back which means the Khan is too, and I wonder if we are going to get all the primarchs together soon.

Good chapter Cawl is on Nyx, Dorn is freaking back which means the Khan is too, and I wonder if we are going to get all the primarchs together soon.
9/18/2024 c41
1avatar junkman
just rereading this. at chapter 41 Youve got the queen of blades eventually Taylor's epithet is going to be known throughout the imperium the queen of escalation.

just rereading this. at chapter 41 Youve got the queen of blades eventually Taylor's epithet is going to be known throughout the imperium the queen of escalation.
9/10/2024 c45
3Visions of a Kaleidoscope
I see Malacca, I rejoiced for my home state in Malaysia.
Hopefully the Planet Malacca is one SEA-themed Hive World or something. It's also funny if it's a Feudal World the very least.
Thanks

I see Malacca, I rejoiced for my home state in Malaysia.
Hopefully the Planet Malacca is one SEA-themed Hive World or something. It's also funny if it's a Feudal World the very least.
Thanks
9/6/2024 c64
1Secundum
Well, finally managed to make my way through this. Story is decent, and I liked some of the smaller things like Lord Felthius showing up.
I do find Dragon INCREDIBLY annoying and arrogant however, and your habit of referring to female characters as 'the female parahuman/warlord/etc.' is a bit strange and really sticks out.

Well, finally managed to make my way through this. Story is decent, and I liked some of the smaller things like Lord Felthius showing up.
I do find Dragon INCREDIBLY annoying and arrogant however, and your habit of referring to female characters as 'the female parahuman/warlord/etc.' is a bit strange and really sticks out.