for The Diabolical World According to Flora Reinhold8/29/2016 c1 
134The Mocking J
It's great to see more of this series, and I'm looking forward to the humorous oneshot that follows. I think, given Flora's relatively minor part in Pandora's Box, you really expanded on her thoughts here.
Looking forward to the next part!
134The Mocking JIt's great to see more of this series, and I'm looking forward to the humorous oneshot that follows. I think, given Flora's relatively minor part in Pandora's Box, you really expanded on her thoughts here.
Looking forward to the next part!
8/24/2016 c1 Saoirse in the Queen's English
Oka, finally got around reading this and reviewing. Hm, what to say? Well, being honest, this wasn't one of my favorite updates. I just feel that it was a bit bland. I can't pinpoint why. I feel so rude now, but don't misunderstand, it's not a bad story. Comme ci, comme ça? I am looking forward to Lost Future because you can never go wrong with it. I also want to see more of Flora's thoughts on Clive, Claire, Bill Hawks, Luke's leaving, etc.
And yes! People came swooping back for pre and post Level-5 Vision but I feel are now just stepping away? Anyways, I still applaud your story. Bravo, and sorry if I come out as rude. :(
Oka, finally got around reading this and reviewing. Hm, what to say? Well, being honest, this wasn't one of my favorite updates. I just feel that it was a bit bland. I can't pinpoint why. I feel so rude now, but don't misunderstand, it's not a bad story. Comme ci, comme ça? I am looking forward to Lost Future because you can never go wrong with it. I also want to see more of Flora's thoughts on Clive, Claire, Bill Hawks, Luke's leaving, etc.
And yes! People came swooping back for pre and post Level-5 Vision but I feel are now just stepping away? Anyways, I still applaud your story. Bravo, and sorry if I come out as rude. :(
8/24/2016 c1 Aria and Clive
Aria: I concur! Every day, before I start school, I pick up my computer and check for anything new!
Clive: She does, she really does-need to start reading more fanfictions.
Aria: I read some Pokémon fanfics! And a few Phoenix Wright Fanfics! I even read a Percy Jackson Fanfic!
Clive: You have read 1 Wright fanfic that wasn't a crossover with Professor Layton! The PJ was too!
Aria: And the Pokémon?
Clive: ...
Aria: Anyway, Can't wait for the Unwound World! It's my favorite!
Clive: I thought Azran Legacy was!
Aria: Well... I don't own any but Azran and Miracle...
Clive: ... Just do the stupid outro.
Aria: OK!
~Aria Cantari~
~Clive Dove~
Aria: I concur! Every day, before I start school, I pick up my computer and check for anything new!
Clive: She does, she really does-need to start reading more fanfictions.
Aria: I read some Pokémon fanfics! And a few Phoenix Wright Fanfics! I even read a Percy Jackson Fanfic!
Clive: You have read 1 Wright fanfic that wasn't a crossover with Professor Layton! The PJ was too!
Aria: And the Pokémon?
Clive: ...
Aria: Anyway, Can't wait for the Unwound World! It's my favorite!
Clive: I thought Azran Legacy was!
Aria: Well... I don't own any but Azran and Miracle...
Clive: ... Just do the stupid outro.
Aria: OK!
~Aria Cantari~
~Clive Dove~
8/24/2016 c1 4girlycathy
very nice! love this chapter, i like how its very focused on Flora and her thoughts but not so much that you lose the story; well done!
4girlycathyvery nice! love this chapter, i like how its very focused on Flora and her thoughts but not so much that you lose the story; well done!
8/24/2016 c1 Guest
That's a very good written OS! I feel kind of sorry for Flora for being left during the game (I forgot the dog's name .w.).
And yes, I've noticed Fanfiction is quite quiet, it worries me.
That's a very good written OS! I feel kind of sorry for Flora for being left during the game (I forgot the dog's name .w.).
And yes, I've noticed Fanfiction is quite quiet, it worries me.