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2/27/2017 c1 DarkKing009
Yes! very good
11/2/2016 c1 1Call.Me.Random
I NEED to know what happens next! Please continue!
9/18/2016 c1 tacaloking
The soldiers brought her to the dining room. Quite a strange place to meet her brother again for the first time in years, but she kept her mouth shut. She was taken to the dining room. A strange place to meet her brother again, but she kept her mouth shut
i would suggest deleting the last sentence it is completely unneeded the only other problem i see is i would think mai would be at best distant turds azula so you should try and go into why she went up to azula so warmly i do like that azula is not very talkative as it shows on some level shes uncertain about everything i hope you continue this i am interested to she what you do
9/1/2016 c1 Guest
Pretty good thunderbun
8/28/2016 c1 Guest
I love it
8/27/2016 c1 Azula
Really good story ! Bravo ! Please Update Soon !

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