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12/20/2016 c4 Guest
Please finish this story!
12/20/2016 c5 ivylene.h
It's a shame you'll be stopping this story for a while but I hope you'll find the right inspiration to write it the at you want too! This one-shot was super cute Ash and May are adorablw together I can't wait to see you write more like this one :)
12/16/2016 c5 Nyx-the Umbreon
Hello everyone! I know I know, you all hate me and I don't blame you. I've been gone for a long time without updating 'A Kalos Surprise'. And to be honest with you guys, the reason why I stopped updating that story is because it's a mess. When I first started writing the story I was so excited, but now I look back at it and I think to myself, 'Is that seriously all you can do?' So I'm going to put this story on hiatus and try and come up with ideas and a decent plot. I've actually already come up with a bunch of ideas and drama for the story but it's still not enough. So while I do that I'm going to be releasing some one-shots to try and keep you guys from getting bored. God knows this site needs more AdvanceShipping fics. So this will be on Hiatus for a while. Sorry everyone, trust me I hate doing this, but I have to in order to make it into a good story. Expect some one-shots soon. Thank you. :)

Tearful face*y-y you're not going to update this story guy waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhahahahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaahuhuhhuhuhu
12/14/2016 c3 stevexclax
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. How is it coming along?
12/2/2016 c1 Phoenix
For some reason I think you based this story of from the Vow
10/26/2016 c4 Phoenix
Drew is gonna get it
But I'm surprised Ash didn't have his aura spike up
10/24/2016 c4 Scooby-Doo 150
Great chapter u got here I can tell it was really emotional especially what happened to may ash needs to find her quickly and help her in anyway he can and help regain her memories i hope she remembers ash first before anything else and help give her comfort keeping her safe and being by her side and starts realizing and Starts understanding that he always had feelings for may like how she always had romantic feelings for ash and hope u get better soon and update soon please
10/24/2016 c4 Guest
I'll say this chapter was really emotional even as I was reading the story I felt Ash's anger go through the roof as soon as mays mom described the person who did this to may and as soon as he figured out it was drew oh boy he looked like he was going to lose his temper I hope ash finds may as soon as possible and help bring back her memories of ash and other things she forgot about and I'm sorry your sick I know how that feels I know you will get better soon and as soon as ash finds may ash tries to help may bring back memories of him first by showing and talk about everything that they did during their journey through hoenn and kanto like showing may Ash's half terracotta ribbon and talk about all the times he was there for her when she needed him or all the times he helped and saved her life
10/24/2016 c4 stevexclax
It was good to hear some backstory of what happened to May. Although, you never mentioned how May got the name "Sapphire". This leads to many questions. If "Sapphire" knows who her parents are, then why didn't they tell her her real name? Why didn't Caroline tell Ash that May was now known as Sapphire?

I hope May's pokemon remember Ash, because that should clear a lot of things up for her. I should also mention that the story description is reversed from the plot of the story.

Overall, this was a great chapter, and I am really itching for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. I hope you feel better soon.
10/24/2016 c4 7Orizon-S89
So, May was pursued by Drew, denied his requests, shoved into the side of a passing car, went into a coma, and suffered 8 years of amnesia.

Ash's going to need something extra special/powerful to reverse that.
10/12/2016 c2 215ChloboShoka
I like how Ash talks about May here.
10/12/2016 c1 ChloboShoka
Good work for your first story. I like your name as well.
10/7/2016 c3 Guest
This is getting interesting I know ash must be shocked about that may got into an accident that made her lose her memories i know ash will do whatever it takes to help may get her memories back and be by her side and I know this is to soon but when the Time comes maybe you can make an advance fanfic where ash and may go to the aloha region it would be interesting to see them travel there and please do not add drew to this story he's one of the characters in the anime I really don't like the most I just can't stand him and I hope the next chapter is a little bit longer I like reading long chapters update soon advance shipping forever ( ashxmay)
10/7/2016 c3 Advance shipper
I understand how u feel advance shipping is by far one of my main favorite shippings I love I really like how ash and may interact with each other and how so much alike they are as I continue to watch ash and may travel and how deeply they cared for each other especially when they both are both in love with each other even tho ash is dense but sometimes his actions sometimes speak other wise I don't support or like amour shipping advance shipping is the main favorite for me ash and may will always be my favorite couple and don't let all these amour shippings story get to u just keep going and do what u do best i know there other advance shippers who love advance shipping just as much as you and I do and I'm liking this story so far and it's a very good advance shipping fanfic and I wonder what happened to may and how did she forget who ash is i say ash should go find her and help her get her memories back especially the ones she has with ash and can't wait to see what other advance shipping moments will happen between them if anyone can help get her memories back it's ash and I know the half terracotta ribbon they have will play a role to and one more thing keep advance shipping alive for us advance shippers no matter how bad the situation is i know u have what it takes
10/7/2016 c3 Anonymous Person
Ugh... please not another amnesia fic! Their so cliche, it almost makes me want to cringe. Honestly, their not bad in the least it's just that their done so freakin' often. It's like the author says I need a problem... hm... OH I KNOW! AMNESIA! It's get's really annoying reading the same idea over and over again.
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