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9/11/2016 c1 SnowKing1701
Good start. One problem though, if this is set ten years in the future, how does Caskett have a 15 year old girl and 13 year old twins? The math does not work out, especiall if Beckett was wheelchair bound for a year, that would make the kids 8 and 6 at the oldest. Good job though. Take care.
8/29/2016 c1 a reader
Interesting start. But how come they have 15 and 13 year old kids only 10 years after the end of the series?
8/28/2016 c1 Yeesh
"targets Castle's distant father"

ESTRANGED father.

Some relatives (third cousins; great uncles) are distant relatives, but a FATHER can't be.
8/28/2016 c1 Guest
Interesting start

Ten years after would make with your time line of Kate healing lily 8years old and Jake and Reece 6 years old
Not 15 and 13

Interesting start with Alexis becoming a cop
Like the idea of Jackson being the catalyst to the story

Looking forward to more

Thank you
8/28/2016 c1 Guest
I love it
8/28/2016 c1 Hamlet 77
Interesting premis, liked the start. Then you had to ruin. By mentioning Haley Shipton.

I'll give it a few more chapters to see how it progresses.
8/28/2016 c1 92FearlessHeartSVU
Very intriguing. I like that Alexis is a cop. Please update soon.
8/28/2016 c1 2cruise1213
I like this story. I want to know about the voice on the phone. Where are Rick and Kate? Have a Blessed remaining weekend.

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