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9/30/2017 c4 1princess serenity0822
Amazing please update soon
2/1/2017 c1 Hkcutiepie1352
Update please. I love your story!
1/13/2017 c4 Rae
update please!
10/8/2016 c4 Sailor Nate
I love the rewrite so far, I'm glad you added in Luna. I'm enjoying how your adding in whole conversations in Japanese instead of just a word here and a phrase there like most other Sailor Moon fanfics I've read. Great work so far, and I hope to see more chapters soon.
9/13/2016 c4 5SonicAnime2010
As someone who's taking Japanese classes in university, trying to learn the language.. I have ound some hiccups in translating from Japanese to English here in this chapter.
9/12/2016 c4 6Puffgirl1952 the 2nd
Can't wait for Gibbs to learn about Serena being Sailor Moon and giving Luna a lecture...
9/12/2016 c3 5SonicAnime2010
little correction from my previous review I meant "senshi".. stupid cell phone autocorrect.. At any rate.. this should be interesting.. yeah I know that this is for Serena/Usagi to bond with Gibbs more.. but as that saying goes.. "no rest for the weary" also "no rest for the wicked" for baddies too
9/6/2016 c3 6Puffgirl1952 the 2nd
Keep rocking, rolling and writing...
9/2/2016 c2 Iskra
Omg I love this chapter so much and I can't wait for the next few chapters and I hope that you will continue writing this story and I like this rewrite of this story. :) ;)
9/2/2016 c2 5SonicAnime2010
Welp, this is a fine how do you do... breaking this news to the other sunshine would be fun... not to mention this is a magic girl warrior anime.. baddies will come up
9/2/2016 c2 6Puffgirl1952 the 2nd
Can't wait to read more and see what happens when Gibbs suddenly learns his daughter's secret.
8/29/2016 c1 5SonicAnime2010
Well the beginning of the story here doesn't seem to change much in comparison to the original version.. maybe I just haven't read the first chapter of the original in a while
8/28/2016 c1 6Puffgirl1952 the 2nd
Looking forward to reading the rewrite...

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