for Kyriarchía Isorropía Tou (Balance's Sovereign) 17/2/2023 c6 
3Diana9922
Well written, I love this story.
If there is a sequel I can't wait to read it.
3Diana9922Well written, I love this story.
If there is a sequel I can't wait to read it.
7/12/2017 c6 3aRTsyisAwesome
Ha! I liked how you added Percy has a Merman form. Your doing a great job!
3aRTsyisAwesomeHa! I liked how you added Percy has a Merman form. Your doing a great job!
5/9/2017 c6 Prince Salvasahar
Great story. There aren't many PJO/Claymore crossovers, and even fewer that are good. I hope you haven't abandoned this
Great story. There aren't many PJO/Claymore crossovers, and even fewer that are good. I hope you haven't abandoned this
12/16/2016 c1 1son-of-THANATOSxe
no idea what claymore is... and yes I still have my son-of-THANATOSxe account but its only on my phone., which I am on now
1son-of-THANATOSxeno idea what claymore is... and yes I still have my son-of-THANATOSxe account but its only on my phone., which I am on now
10/27/2016 c6 Mathew5641
I really like your story I found it enjoyable and I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
I really like your story I found it enjoyable and I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
9/10/2016 c1 HaywireEagle
Honestly. I found the whole thing mediocre for the most part.
The way you seperated Percy and Annabeth. That was new. For once she didn't die or cheat on him with his brother or some god awful 180 turn from the established character Quick, clean, somewhat understandable if regretable. . So I have to give you props for that. A small oasis in a vast desert of random reverses and betrayal bullshit.
That being said. Everything else is rather... lacking for the most part. What has happened is rather quickly thrown at us and with little warning and kind of weak in general. Little build before given into a fairly rushed narration/exposistion/memory.
Then there is the whole "Primordial God of Time" That is just... horribly painful and Gary Stu it is not even funny. I mean seriously. I was curious at first, but that bit really soured my interest a great deal.
Honestly. I found the whole thing mediocre for the most part.
The way you seperated Percy and Annabeth. That was new. For once she didn't die or cheat on him with his brother or some god awful 180 turn from the established character Quick, clean, somewhat understandable if regretable. . So I have to give you props for that. A small oasis in a vast desert of random reverses and betrayal bullshit.
That being said. Everything else is rather... lacking for the most part. What has happened is rather quickly thrown at us and with little warning and kind of weak in general. Little build before given into a fairly rushed narration/exposistion/memory.
Then there is the whole "Primordial God of Time" That is just... horribly painful and Gary Stu it is not even funny. I mean seriously. I was curious at first, but that bit really soured my interest a great deal.
9/3/2016 c5 Nolifeking222
well keep it up i would like to see a PJO claymore crossover have an actual ending for once
well keep it up i would like to see a PJO claymore crossover have an actual ending for once