2/5/2019 c9 ak1ba
awesome, you are still alive. this a good start for another crazy case. i hope we wont wait too long. i'm hooked to the case.
awesome, you are still alive. this a good start for another crazy case. i hope we wont wait too long. i'm hooked to the case.
2/5/2019 c9 Guest
Kys scoutgryph
Kys scoutgryph
2/5/2019 c9 1Combat Engineer
Nothing like a politician to remind everyone that there are jobs out there for the worst of society. Also, that Digigrade joke was top notch.
Nothing like a politician to remind everyone that there are jobs out there for the worst of society. Also, that Digigrade joke was top notch.
2/5/2019 c9 memoryweaver
I've meant to leave a review oh-so-many times before but just can't adequately express what this story means to me — so this inadequate explanation will have to do.
You see, I absolutely adore your GotG story but you weren't updating it and I saw this one pop up, as it was written. I ignored it. For months and months, I just wasn’t interested in reading something about some odd talking animals cartoon.
Finally, in January last year (2018) I couldn't stand it any longer and figured I’d give it a read — hadn't so much as seen the trailer for the film.
And, wow! I was hooked. Your writing has always impressed me but this was simply superb. I finished reading and immediately went and bought the film, still expecting to hate it.
I'm extatic to admit I was wrong. Joyously and momentously wrong. I *loved* the film and the world and characters. It set me off on a year-long odyssey of wonderful Zootopia fan-fictions. I've been reading, solidly, in my every spare moment for an entire year and I’m still loving every single second.
And this is the fic that started it all — This wonderful, funny, brilliantly written and sheer masterpiece of a work. And now, we're treated to a long-awaited update.
I'm absolutely over the moon, and can't thank you enough both for continuing to write this *and* for introducing me to a whole new world. I can, quite honestly, say that this story changed my life. I've made new friends, discovered a whole new world of fiction and, I think, been made a better person as a result.
Oh, and you really really should upload these to AO3 as well — there's a whole other audience out there...
I've meant to leave a review oh-so-many times before but just can't adequately express what this story means to me — so this inadequate explanation will have to do.
You see, I absolutely adore your GotG story but you weren't updating it and I saw this one pop up, as it was written. I ignored it. For months and months, I just wasn’t interested in reading something about some odd talking animals cartoon.
Finally, in January last year (2018) I couldn't stand it any longer and figured I’d give it a read — hadn't so much as seen the trailer for the film.
And, wow! I was hooked. Your writing has always impressed me but this was simply superb. I finished reading and immediately went and bought the film, still expecting to hate it.
I'm extatic to admit I was wrong. Joyously and momentously wrong. I *loved* the film and the world and characters. It set me off on a year-long odyssey of wonderful Zootopia fan-fictions. I've been reading, solidly, in my every spare moment for an entire year and I’m still loving every single second.
And this is the fic that started it all — This wonderful, funny, brilliantly written and sheer masterpiece of a work. And now, we're treated to a long-awaited update.
I'm absolutely over the moon, and can't thank you enough both for continuing to write this *and* for introducing me to a whole new world. I can, quite honestly, say that this story changed my life. I've made new friends, discovered a whole new world of fiction and, I think, been made a better person as a result.
Oh, and you really really should upload these to AO3 as well — there's a whole other audience out there...
1/21/2019 c4 scoutgryph
I just love re-reading the part where Nick gets punched out. He deserves it, but takes it with style.
I just love re-reading the part where Nick gets punched out. He deserves it, but takes it with style.
12/23/2018 c8 scoutgryph
Merry Christmas! I love and still read this series, and still hope you can continue it some day.
Merry Christmas! I love and still read this series, and still hope you can continue it some day.
12/12/2018 c8 Thor Cosmic
Lol your comedian level is off the chart Rock!
I haven't laugh this hard at a fanfic story arcs this long before. Priceless. I'm not sure how long before the next update or how many cases there will be, but I can't wait when the next chapter is release.
I'm cool with long chapter Rock, because I enjoy it up to now. Your writing style is good and one of the many reasons why, when I check any fanfic, I will check my story alert 1st.
Lol your comedian level is off the chart Rock!
I haven't laugh this hard at a fanfic story arcs this long before. Priceless. I'm not sure how long before the next update or how many cases there will be, but I can't wait when the next chapter is release.
I'm cool with long chapter Rock, because I enjoy it up to now. Your writing style is good and one of the many reasons why, when I check any fanfic, I will check my story alert 1st.
10/18/2018 c4 kit kederich
Ah, I have to re-read this now and again, just to enjoy its rich complexity and sheer brilliant humor! I do hope you can someday continue this series. Thanks so much for writing it here.
Ah, I have to re-read this now and again, just to enjoy its rich complexity and sheer brilliant humor! I do hope you can someday continue this series. Thanks so much for writing it here.
7/30/2018 c1 31Aeshna Lacrymosa
You write Nick with such an extensive intellect it's creepy and fun. The characters are spot on and entertaining. I sense a terrific plot unfolding.
You write Nick with such an extensive intellect it's creepy and fun. The characters are spot on and entertaining. I sense a terrific plot unfolding.
7/13/2018 c1 Guest
I'm so eagerly waiting for a new chapter! I come to this site so often just to see if three was an upload on your story... Hopefully soon? Please, please, please!
I'm so eagerly waiting for a new chapter! I come to this site so often just to see if three was an upload on your story... Hopefully soon? Please, please, please!
7/13/2018 c1 Guest
I'm so eagerlly
I'm so eagerlly
6/21/2018 c8 7Lachivo
Reading this is an absolute joy. I adore your sense of humour, and Christ do you seem to have something personal against Nick, but I love it and it's cripplingly funny. And what's more, you shift organically between comedy and drama very smoothly, which is a feat.
Bold move with the format. I think it works for the kind of TVish vibe you're going for. Took me a bit of getting used to, but by chapter 2 I loved it. You also have a way of writing the characters so that it really feels like they're animals. Little things like Nick at one point reminding Judy that he can't digest cellulose, or mentioning in the narrative that he sank into the snow to his hoch. It makes it much more believably Zootopia. The differences between the animals is such an enormous part of that universe.
I also quite enjoy your plots so far. They're just convoluted enough that they give that whodunit vibe while still seeming real. You've got a lot of balls in the air, though, what with Dough, the raccoon, and Nick's one-sided love life, all of which you'll presumably come back to at some point. Can't wait to see how it'll all pan out.
Reading this is an absolute joy. I adore your sense of humour, and Christ do you seem to have something personal against Nick, but I love it and it's cripplingly funny. And what's more, you shift organically between comedy and drama very smoothly, which is a feat.
Bold move with the format. I think it works for the kind of TVish vibe you're going for. Took me a bit of getting used to, but by chapter 2 I loved it. You also have a way of writing the characters so that it really feels like they're animals. Little things like Nick at one point reminding Judy that he can't digest cellulose, or mentioning in the narrative that he sank into the snow to his hoch. It makes it much more believably Zootopia. The differences between the animals is such an enormous part of that universe.
I also quite enjoy your plots so far. They're just convoluted enough that they give that whodunit vibe while still seeming real. You've got a lot of balls in the air, though, what with Dough, the raccoon, and Nick's one-sided love life, all of which you'll presumably come back to at some point. Can't wait to see how it'll all pan out.
3/29/2018 c6 ck
So is the racoon Sly Cooper? Great character, real competition for Nick.
So is the racoon Sly Cooper? Great character, real competition for Nick.